Bitchslap Diss 2 Djx(Dr. Jag-a-lot Xtrordinare)
 

This has been moved to the Finesse Streetz vs, Djx thread


Yo, we ain't gone get nowhere bcuz U hatin like a bitch. And I hate bitches. Here's my diss 2 u pretty woman:

I'm sending this diss verse through via mail in a package//1
Don't ever walk through tha Chi with a bulletproof vest, u better wear a bed mattress//2
I got tech9s for minds like yours who can't rhyme//3
That'll make you you wake up, realize, and apologize//4
I understand u hypnotized by my lines//5
My jacob piece timez, bling so hard I could pull 8 of bin Laden wives//6
And if I gave you 20 of em, you'll lose every single of tha tries//7
I call you a pussy minus 8, you only got 1 livez//8
I switch up tha flow, rhyme so more, F dot Streetz "The Untouchable//9
U breakable, softa tha Heath Cliff Huxtable(Cosby Show)//10
Watch out, lay low, while I put slugs in ya mug//11
My 9 is lonely, come close and let your mouth give it a hug//12
U hater times 2, I'll blind you//13
I could still type tha keystyle while I find a word that ryhmes with 2, I found one you're threw//14
I bet u tha type that talk about being iced out//15
Well turn tha lights out, I'll snatch your jewlry, you'll really be iced out//16
Now I'ma let ya whole internet rap career fade out//17
Even if I smoked 5 blunts I could never be blazed out//18
I ain't tha type to go around doing tha sidetalk//19
But I'm tha type to blow your brains all over tha sidewalk//20
It's Finesse Streetz, F Y I, I'm holding a gat//21
Don't make this 4 5 blow ya chest and give you a lung transplant//22
U a has been, While I'm tha master of rap shaolin//23
I'm hitting you consecutively, leaving ya whole style ouching//24
Chicago niccas always roll no less than a 40 mag//25
See you tha type that'll hold up tha rainbow flag//26
Get ya mind right or get you gon get ya mind left//27
I'ma keep hitting ya chest with lines until you can't catch yo breath//28
I ain't got one now, but I'm rocking tha mic like Siegal and
Free//29
And your reply verse still ain't tight enough, I could hear you hitting tha backspace key//30
My flow is supreme by all means, I get you hypa//31
I have ya head moving side 2 side like windshield wipaz//32
I'm a real MC, but CEO of Major League//33
Meaning I'll dangling you over a balcony like you a Michael Jackson seed//34
Wanna know how tight my beats is, go to my bank and count my G's//35
I also got Michael Jackson assassins, they always shooting from tha trees//36
What I hit ya wit is consecutiveness, I'm collective in this//37
I spitting that hott shyt to you, make ya dick burn when ya taking a piss//38
Let it be known, I decapitate niccas limbs//39
My flow so strong, I just knocked tha trees off ya timbs//40


AND STILL!!!

Holla At A Playa!!1

Dogg, you need to think next time you come at a veteran in this internet rap industry. I don't even know you and I just made you famous. With that verse , I breathed life into your whole style.

I roll with Major League// Making Major Cream!!!!!!

ok
 

not bad dawg...It was an ok battle verse, not hard on punches, but you had a few that did a little bit of damage. Flow was a bit off on some parts, and tha structure was kinda iffy. Well..over-all, like I sads not bad. Metaphors would be nice and maybe a multi here and there. keep spittin, ya got some potential dawg.

peace