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this is for the ones who love to hate
its the bliss thats so tough to obtain unless you remain with abilities keen seeing the inner mainframes invisability still styles and skills be taken by frost tossed into a frozen tundra,heat's lost defeating the cause w/a stroke of genius society decieves but's hooked,& fiends us breaths golden dust down our throats surround the masses with uneasy souls breezes of fire keepin cold coals aflame not aspiring for fame,b/sights set in their aim reflecting blame upon myself through mirrors on the shelf better days my hands were once delt now oppurtunities stealthfully evade un-successful counter-attacks slayed an image portraid caves and cracks back to steps 1,2,and 3 still paying tabs layin slabs of concrete material my reign beseated underneath the imperial preying for a miracle but left without belief concieve my fate in a glass ball of schemes seen as a nusience but the streets are my home so leave this already broken leaf alone doing things on my own,mic in hand lifes only bland if you look at beuty and see plain land i scan my vision deeper and beyond a seeker of faith and love, making me strong i typed this really fast just seeing what came out, tell me what ya think |
replies my people, replies!!
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lol, ^^^ when I saw those replies it made me laugh b/c you said replies are welcome and stuff and it was like you thought "I know why they didn't reply, I didn't have links... Ha!, now reply bitches..." lmao, but anyway....
Okay, this wasn't all that hot I have definately seen you come off better. This flow was choppy and after reading it for a while it starts sinking into a poetry type feel. The lyrics were decent but it carried a good message. This is definately not one of your best, keep droppin. pz |
sucka^^
lol j/p i wrote this in seriously like 5 min.. so yea anyways my topical piece is doper than yours! HAHAHAHHA |
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OMG that is the weakest reply ive ever seen!
HERB!!! |
i wannabe be a herb to
this was nice LOL no im just playing it was nice but i seen you do better, but you cant be nice in every rhyme. the longer it was the more i lost intrest. |
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