![]() |
Freestyle
my telekinetic conceptions in depth perceptions directs alignment to rhyme cosigns of the minds confinement
DLoc provoked focus locked to targets of prodigal verbal assault Inter dissecting the complexions of lyrical third eye vaults Intricating cross connections with the conceptions of 360 degree directions The Pathway of the blind, I blast bass waves with a rhyme Never mislead I shred mists of red in quantum leaps from the mind Rhythm heats that grind shrines of Zen with whirlwinds of vinyl worlds in a spin opting as the widows part And for the windows of opportunity, I’m just leaving a mark Silencing the steps throughout the night sights bleed and read from the heart Railing the Reflections Shattered by the Shards of Hells Razored Rezurrections Dawning the Uplifts till the Nights transcends Lights Hailing Ebrasions Why I get astrophysical with the mic like Fidel Castro pivoting a pistol With the list that go unquestionable and semi automatic anonymous engraving you a BI fly identity crisis with the advice to splice sight with the life for light I fight devils with the trebles on levels of mellow flow of a pencil Break backs and snap you like a pretzel when I get mental As I get deeper into the frights from hell I rise like the sun from east set west upon the third rail Drawing within inner potential for this sentinel Rhyming shrines delivered to the mic in split beats of a spliced impale My lyrical scale pours blood in Morris codes of flooded rhyme One to One-Ten grudge the budge and you’ll catch the slugs to your mind I'm an Optic psychotic to you bastards that like to gossip with the only Topic as my murderous turbulence through you bitches cockpits with prominence Forcing flows of dominance with a source of the soul, rollin over ya hoe with soldier overthrow |
|
Whoa, I gotta say this... I really don't feel that as being a "freestyle". The vocabulary threw this thing off badly to me. The vocab was just too much for this. You had some tight lines in there though, such as...
Break backs and snap you like a pretzel when I get mental As I get deeper into the frights from hell I rise like the sun from east set west upon the third rail Drawing within inner potential for this sentinel I also think the bar length was a little long too. Nothing major to really improve on this though but to me it threw off the verse. Keep droppin. pz |
Damn, Thats alot of vocab. cool though.
|
shit u just a human dictionery.cool though i kinda o liked it
|
UPZ ONe
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:46 AM. |