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Time in! I feel like rhyming so I'll bust a flow
Don't be whining while I chime in, just enjoy the show
You love to diss me cause my skill is at an all-time low
But I'll perfect it and direct till...Geronimo
My lips flip words that fit with the best of your best
And you have no words to say when spit gets off my chest
My blood's not black so I'll walk down Shady lane
I just can't help but drop it cause I got rap on the brain
I'm slapping my keyboard like the rest of you wannabe's
Spinning beautiful threads like a black-and-white Donna Reed
Just can't wait to hear everyone putting me down
So I'm asking myself why I even hang around
Just for fun, here's another one, critique away
I'll be back, check you fags, yo we'll battle someday

this was a decent show fo skills....i say a show of skills cause the topic was nothing original...just your usual "im the dopest" type shit. but it was still nice....you had a good flow.

i suggest you try and put in more multis to make your shit more somplex than it is, and add some metaphors and imagery to rasie your game another level