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deushy 02-20-03 06:05 PM

DEUSHY vs. BUTTMC
 
AIYYO, IMA START
SAME OL' RULEZ


acceptin dis battle kid, ya musta been delerious//
why you even try me kid, you cant compare da experience//
ya hole style is a joke, nigga be crazy to take it serious//
raprippa ya wack, and u facin a veteran//
u goin nowhere, like AL GORE participatin in tha 2000 ELECTION//
letheal injection, grab ya pen and make-a-correction//
i heard da problem from yoh bitch… go fake-an-erection//
This nigga's out of his league like da sledders in Cool Running//
What does BUTTMC mean? It means that yo azz is nething BUTT CUNNING//Your a lonesome nobody, yo crew straight pulled a David Copperfield//And gamblin with police the only way this fool could cop a deal//You couldn't be running shit if you changed your name to Diarrhea//You couldn't beat me or my music if our names were Ike and Tina//I mean it... I bust a tight verse to explode and burst your ass and spleen//he's so gay people recognize him by the scent and vasoline//u looked for a challenge now ur-in-luck//I'll liquify ya versez, and put em in a HURIN-cup//cuz i own you, u like my rhymin-slave//u betta think b4 u fall victom to nine-inch-bladez//all evidence iz collected, and ya whack rhymez relfected//that jus like we expected tha fag inside u is detected//
u made a mistake, spit and didnt protect-it//now we killed ya career and u cant resurect-it//callin ya self a lyricalogist, hit u wit lryical whipe-lash and make ya neck-brake//vist u tha next-day, and autograph ya neck-brace//but i give credit... but not to u, cuz wack kidz, like u alwayz get-it//a knife to ya throat, and steal tip so u can digest-it//
I TOSS MINE ROUGH,BUT I DON’T EVEN HAVE TO RAP TO WIN THIS FIRST/
I COULD JUST POST SOME SMILEYS AND THEY’D STILL BE BETTER THAN HIS VERSE//


HOLLA

deushy 02-20-03 10:23 PM

aiiyo this nigga BUTTMC prolly aint gonna answer, so i dunno what to do... i think its unanimous... if u agree holla back and leave a reply on y you think it should be....

I DONT SEE A POINT IN WAITIN FOR THIS NIGGA... SO IM UPPIN UNANIMOUS VOTES...

deushy 02-21-03 05:22 PM

aiyyo, better answer soon BUTTMC or this battle gonna be my win ............ ima give you till tonite


HOLLA

r.i.p. *rIQAShI* THIS 1'S FOR U
VICT. OF dRIve By

ButtMC 02-21-03 07:41 PM

i'm here
 
yo some people work for a living.

bitch you only wishin fission with fissures gets ya/
i'm sicker than the plague you a hague/
i'll strangle you with my mangled words/
at random angles I wrangle your simple samples/
pencil panther pump one at ya heres your answer/
your dance like stances just can't handle flow/
I could spray you with a fire hose but still your nose won't recall/
you always drop the ball car stall not again/
your idiocy knows no end/ you think you somethin special/
I only increase your stress level several sattelites couldn't find me/
devine rhymes will shatter your spine/
i've got mine so where's yours? you storm on buzz words/
i'm a non-conformist in a vortex with more depth than a swarm of hornets/
guess what bud you the bug/ swept under a rug/you only debate once/
escapes none, you a dunce/ i can see society as inscribed some kind of lie in your mind/
you thought i was gay?/ my last name is BUTTigieg/
you try to play with words/ i slay with courage/
you best just stay indoors before BMC make your breath cease/

Van Ished 02-21-03 10:57 PM

Interestin....

Deush-
I think yours had the better flow out of the two, but your vocab could do some serious upliftin. Your punches were strong every once and a while and some of the lines took away from your consistency.

BMC-
You have an intriguing ryme scheme. It threw me off a lil but I caught on. Your lines could use some lengthening to improve the flow, but you have good complexity. You had strong lines, but they seemed empty without a setup or follow up line.

like:
bitch you only wishin fission with fissures gets ya/
i'm sicker than the plague you a hague/

^that coulda been better if you had a line that complimented the first one instead of jumping into the next.

Vote=Deushy

pz

BlUnT-MC 02-21-03 11:57 PM

I'm-a go with dyce on this one... I liked the style "MC-BUTT" has.. if he had have put a li'l more effort into his line length and structure it woulda been his win but because of the more pro-tecnique deushy had my vote's for him

T-Square 02-22-03 12:01 AM

Vote Deushy
 
alright, this battle was not coo, so many wordplay personals are so fuckin available from both ya names (I know mines easy too)
But

Bars What does BUTTMC mean? It means that yo azz is nething BUTT CUNNING//Your a lonesome nobody, yo crew straight pulled a David Copperfield//And gamblin with police the only way this fool could cop a deal/

/You couldn't be running shit if you changed your name to Diarrhea//You couldn't beat me or my music if our names were Ike and Tina//

All reworded played lines, first line was str8....

An tha workin man-
devine rhymes will shatter your spine/
i've got mine so where's yours? you storm on buzz words/
i'm a non-conformist in a vortex with more depth than a swarm of hornets/
Best bar...

Better flow an punches, Deushy,

deushy 02-22-03 03:32 PM

3-0 me uppin tha votes, 1st to 5

keep tha votes comin ppl....

HOLLA - Deushy


"THA OBJECT OF WAR AINT TO DIE FOR YOUR CREW, BUT TO MAKE THA OTHER DIE FOR HIS"-YOURZ TRULY

RIP RIQASHI


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