lil keystyle
 

i woz playin around wit dis a lil bit

ayo dont start on me,obviously im too smart thinkin fo thee,speakin old english got u confused/
see u dont have a clue, ill leave u deceived mislead u to thinkin u can extinguish roxy/
u tryna play me? u jus anotha tramp tryna box-me?dont cum to me wit no respect,no concept,no sucess/
ill intercept ur heart from beatin,teachin it to migrate its place, eatin u inside out till it tastes ur face/
OOOPS its too late to tell me to brake close my flow? ill brake mo den ur nose/
compse u a nu frame, re-arrange ur whole complextion a collection of britany spears n christina auguleara/
ill make it clear in tha mirror its u,u fear!

yo you seem like a person that can write. so instead of admittedly messing around get to it man! take it serious so we can see what you can really do! have fun wid yo rhymes but dont make fun of rap. Peace.

u wasting my time get real put mo effort

"admittedly messing around",wot?
 

its good u replyin thanx n all but......
"admittedly messing around"?? yo iv allready writ like a song n u sayin im "admittedly messing around" wot u mean? i jus wrot dis rhyme to keep my flow goin so i dont lose it.And wot u mean "make fun of rap" how am i???
ehustle im sorry fo wastin ur time but u didnt have to write a reply DID U?? no

peace.~roX~

yo for real, try and find a topic youre into and write your best on that. i understand you trying to keep up your flow but just remember the ones that are the most thought will catch the most attention....
i would like to see something a lot better than this cause this seemed like you had no real focus for the piece and were you were trying to go. get a point across if anything, dont proclaim greatness, show greatness, nah mean?

anyways yea, keep elevating

~1~

aight thanx endovidualmind u actully make sense,peace
~roX~