what?!
 

yo yo,
so you say my talents low,
so is yours you cheap ass hoe,
i be writin on the down low,
while your stealing from eminem downloads,
i mean its just a fact of life,
that this your cross roads,
you might turn out to be great,
or not,
but who knows?
as for me i dont care,
oh no wait i dont give a shit,
so dont try and waste my time,
go ahead and throw a fit,
what you call that rhymin,
cmon bitch gimme a break,
by the time im done with you,
i'll be doin you wife at your own wake.






eat a kit-kat and shut up rahiem.

what?!

yo yo yo

that's the exact same thing i'm saying

what is this

you need to work on bar length, word choice, etc.

just keep at it

~1~

it was alright...for a rhymester.