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Guess whos back
Yo ima come after you little boyz like Michael Jackson in the night
but you wont be able to resist me cause my rhymes are tight// and if you try to fight back ill spit back like Ali in his prime I didnt come here to start shit but Im here to claim whats mine// These threads are usless if you plan on making it big your better off like shuge, just sit there smokin on a cig// Ima leave you now and keep you all in question attackin me will speed up your entry into heaven One ()xoxox[]::::::::::::::::::::::::> |
hahahaha MC HAMMER has come back to the hip hop scene.....you wack nigga go take them SESAME STREET VERSES to PBS....lol
"Yo ima come after you little boyz like Michael Jackson in the night but you wont be able to resist me cause my rhymes are tight// and if you try to fight back ill spit back like Ali in his prime I didnt come here to start shit but Im here to claim whats mine// These threads are usless if you plan on making it big your better off like shuge, just sit there smokin on a cig// Ima leave you now and keep you all in question attackin me will speed up your entry into heaven" THE WHOLE VERSE IS TRASH....."Yo ima come after you little boyz like Michael Jackson in the night but you wont be able to resist me cause my rhymes are tight//".... hahahahahaha ya GAY ASS got to Personal on that verse...cool back on the ELTON JONH LINES.....hahaha u fruit cake WORK ON IT ALOT FRUIT LOOPS Peace.... 1........ |
Alright, judgement has passed and now ill deliever. Ill keep working on my shit
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"My 2 Cents..."
In all honesty...keep your head up son...you'll escape the vast blackness of wackness in no time...lol.
3/10..... Work on everything dog, vocab, wordplay, rhyme scheme, meta's....be more creative, Mike jackson is played like Mario son... The flow was aight...just needed some wordplay.... Holla...... P.E.A.C.E. |
alright thanks. Im trying to get a battle with someone but no one has steped up. Ill just have to wait longer till someone wants to face a New Emcee
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The best part of your verse was....
()xoxox[]::::::::::::::::::::::::> other then that your rhymes need work.....keep at it...1 |
lol thanks
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guess whos wack?
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that would be me
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