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LargeHuman 02-22-03 01:14 PM

Guess whos back
 
Yo ima come after you little boyz like Michael Jackson in the night
but you wont be able to resist me cause my rhymes are tight//
and if you try to fight back ill spit back like Ali in his prime
I didnt come here to start shit but Im here to claim whats mine//
These threads are usless if you plan on making it big
your better off like shuge, just sit there smokin on a cig//
Ima leave you now and keep you all in question
attackin me will speed up your entry into heaven

One

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Rawdeadly 02-22-03 02:26 PM

hahahaha MC HAMMER has come back to the hip hop scene.....you wack nigga go take them SESAME STREET VERSES to PBS....lol

"Yo ima come after you little boyz like Michael Jackson in the night
but you wont be able to resist me cause my rhymes are tight//
and if you try to fight back ill spit back like Ali in his prime
I didnt come here to start shit but Im here to claim whats mine//
These threads are usless if you plan on making it big
your better off like shuge, just sit there smokin on a cig//
Ima leave you now and keep you all in question
attackin me will speed up your entry into heaven"

THE WHOLE VERSE IS TRASH....."Yo ima come after you little boyz like Michael Jackson in the night
but you wont be able to resist me cause my rhymes are tight//"....

hahahahahaha ya GAY ASS got to Personal on that verse...cool back on the ELTON JONH LINES.....hahaha u fruit cake

WORK ON IT ALOT FRUIT LOOPS

Peace....
1........

LargeHuman 02-22-03 02:30 PM

Alright, judgement has passed and now ill deliever. Ill keep working on my shit

1

The 13th Apostles 02-22-03 02:51 PM

"My 2 Cents..."
 
In all honesty...keep your head up son...you'll escape the vast blackness of wackness in no time...lol.

3/10.....

Work on everything dog, vocab, wordplay, rhyme scheme, meta's....be more creative, Mike jackson is played like Mario son... The flow was aight...just needed some wordplay....

Holla......

P.E.A.C.E.

LargeHuman 02-22-03 02:58 PM

alright thanks. Im trying to get a battle with someone but no one has steped up. Ill just have to wait longer till someone wants to face a New Emcee

F-Money Bags 02-22-03 03:53 PM

The best part of your verse was....

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other then that your rhymes need work.....keep at it...1

LargeHuman 02-22-03 03:59 PM

lol thanks

fatman 02-22-03 04:31 PM

guess whos wack?

LargeHuman 02-22-03 04:40 PM

that would be me


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