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BriX 02-22-03 05:05 PM

Some freestyle on paper!!!
 
This some shit i wrote on the train ride...lol

I see your man got you gased up/
He probably had you last night...face down ass up/
Gay clown dont' get smacked up/
Im goin' to war with ma mask on and gats up/
Laugh now cry later, get half of the clip now..half later/
Think of bars faster then XP systems that process heavy data/
You're a beta version of Jada, "you ain't ready"/
Play me and get rocked steady cant push a benz but I sitll cop the chevy/
Grab the toasts and cook faster then Betty/
Crocker, you just a petty cock copper/
So im a let off lead from the choppa/
And still im gettin' big brains like the head of a doctor/
I just put a bag over her face, cause she so ugly the feds wanna lock her/
I'm like a hardtop on a boxster, move and I'll stop ya/
My crew will stomp ya, cause we got more kicks then Gramatica/
Flow bombarded with punchlines and bars are powerfull like the Buccs Frontline/
When I bust mines you better duck 1 time or im a eat you lyrically for lunch time/
Even if a fall off, I'm a get back up and dust off and bust off..to leave your wig in a jigsaw..my saliva is deadly fluid cause im drinkin' with a sickstraw/
You still a big bossvman you better get lost or I make you bounce like 6 4... at the end of the day my dick still end up in your chic's jaw/

hahaha a lil somethin somethin'

BriX 02-22-03 05:06 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=32013

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31992

BlUnT-MC 02-22-03 05:17 PM

yo, it was a good flow... but you read my rhyme about the computer geek gangstas... you're what I'm talking about...
"Laugh now cry later, get half of the clip now..half later/
Think of bars faster then XP systems that process heavy data/
You're a beta version of Jada, "you ain't ready"/...."
talk 'bout totin' a piece.. then you talkin' 'bout tuckin' a fuckin' lap-top.... "beta-version"... shit son... beta not leave your house after 9 say'n that kinda shit... the only gat you holdin' is the one from NES origional...

The 13th Apostles 02-22-03 05:26 PM

"My 2 Cents..."
 
^^^I agree.....

Nuf Said.....

P.E.A.C.E.

BriX 02-22-03 06:17 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by BlUnT-MC
yo, it was a good flow... but you read my rhyme about the computer geek gangstas... you're what I'm talking about...
"Laugh now cry later, get half of the clip now..half later/
Think of bars faster then XP systems that process heavy data/
You're a beta version of Jada, "you ain't ready"/...."
talk 'bout totin' a piece.. then you talkin' 'bout tuckin' a fuckin' lap-top.... "beta-version"... shit son... beta not leave your house after 9 say'n that kinda shit... the only gat you holdin' is the one from NES origional...


And how the fuck are you any different......you probably never battled no body on the street....if you gonna talk shit on a Internet site then you should be out on the streets not at your grandma's house typing shit up......how u gonna tell me what to write or not....man fuck you fake internet thug....1

BriX 02-23-03 12:41 AM

^^^^^

The 13th Apostles 02-23-03 12:58 AM

"My 2 Cents..."
 
^^^Excuss me for a minute...but wasn't that his diss to you? lol. Why can't people be more orginal? I mean come on....seriously, using his own joke against him? Thats witty!

P.E.A.C.E.

BriX 02-23-03 02:06 AM

^^^^And what are you his personal asistant...you make sure no one disses argues with him online or somethin'.....man get the fuck out a here.....uppin' for feedback on the rhymes not no bullshit like above...1

•Cist•M• 02-23-03 02:42 AM

what up "F", long time no see, nice rhyme, kinda funny how some "kids" like to read into the "content" of a rhyme and think they have a joke to tell... makes me realize that "poseurs" are everywhere... and yeah, ha, tight in some places, people should stop the beef and start the peace...
















Voice2012 02-23-03 02:48 AM

Whoever said you have to be a thug to flow?

BriX 02-23-03 01:46 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Voice2012
Whoever said you have to be a thug to flow?



One dickhead talks something about my flow and here comes the wannabees.....man who said i can't flow like that......who said michael jackson can write songs about women when really loves the "kids"....man fuck ur pathetic ass...1

BriX 02-23-03 01:47 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by •Cist•M•
what up "F", long time no see, nice rhyme, kinda funny how some "kids" like to read into the "content" of a rhyme and think they have a joke to tell... makes me realize that "poseurs" are everywhere... and yeah, ha, tight in some places, people should stop the beef and start the peace...



what up man did u change your name what was ur name before....holla at me

D-MinDz 02-23-03 02:47 PM

madd nice

Voice2012 02-23-03 09:46 PM

i don't know why you are calling me a wannabe....but whatever.

BriX 02-25-03 09:51 AM

^^^man if u dont have nothin' to say on the verse then stop freeposting shit...uppin' this bitch.


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