'Only If'.......plz peep
 

if i were to act weird,would i be judged?
if i should shed a tear,would i be hugged?
if i exspressed a fear,would i be exsposode?
if im not correct,would it show?
if im stressed in dis text,would it flow?

'only if' is in my dreams,only if i could change tha scene

if u wernt there, would u be next time?
if u dont care,could i speek my mind?
if u dont see my heart,does that make u blind?
if u wernt smart,could u read this rhyme?
if u feel the same, does it make it easy?
if u could change my name,does it make me roxy?

'Only if' is in my dreams,only if i could change the scene

if we thought simular,would there be peace?
if we smiled more,would we be happy?
if we were to quit, would we all fall?
if we didnt excist, would the world be here at all?
if we were confused,who would correct us?
if we didnt move,who would push us?

only if i knew the future
only if i knew the answer

'only if' is in my dream
only if i could change the scene

hmmm...nice...


...kind of had a simple structure...which was built on to give it a kind of original edge....

...and well, it is kind of hard to execute a piece layed out like this...but you did it so well...it flowed very nicely....had a kind of relaxing, smooth feeling to it...with it's own slightly complex depth to it...

...thought provoking in a way, actually..

...respect...

erm thanx im not sure how to take dat but ill take it as a complament, thanx fo tha reply much love
peace ~roX~

oi roxy lol im in IT now and sum technician bloke is annoyin me lol newayz luv ur rapy thing and wtf is tha bloke hu complimented it on?!?luv ya babez c ya soon

real simple but yougot feeling behind it and
your point across as well..nicely done roxy

~Content~

aight thanx fo tha reply content flowz, lol at princess
peace ~roX~

Simple but makes sence.....nicely done... and it seemed like the way its done was complex..but nice drop......

Yo husband..lol joking