A Story To Tell (Part 1)
 

I went from, Bein' a lil' nigga runnin' from bitches wit cooties
To runnin' tha streets, Pimpin' tha same bitches for booty
Playin in tha rain, Football in tha street, A little kissin' tag
It was all a game, Till hustlers started shootin', Missin' bags
Then I got onto tha train, Started workin' tha lovely hustle
Reached 8th grade, Found out chicks was diggin big muscles
Seen niggas muffled, Babies cryin', Cuz they mama strung out
Make it was tryin', Then tha jakes raided where we hung out
Shot a lung out, Ditched thru tha back door, Left my nigga dead
Similar to tha shit that happens, When fightin over blue and red
Travellin' thru my head, Was thoughts of one thing, Survival
Got tired of bein' a gangster, Tha main reason I started readin tha Bible
Never really had an idol, So I had no role that I could follow
Couldn't really live from tha heart, Cuz it felt my chest was hollow
So I turned to tha bottle, Thought that would carry me on
Felt like I was tha main event, Any bitch would marry me, Wrong
My life started to slip, fell in love wit tha clips, Satan was bitin'
Could never really talk to people, So to communicate I started writin'
Flames started ignitin', Then I found out I wasn't fully a man in ways
And that's tha end of my story, It leaves me where I am today


Tha first part of a story Imma tell about my life.....Tha next part should be up pretty soon.....Peace

this piece was koo, there seems to be mad changes and phases in ya life, and you made the transitions clear, thats a plus, cuz sometime niggas just throw in new shit from out the blue, again this piece was koo, keep uppin

.Responding.
 

This joint was pretty dope. I liked how you matched up the words and phrases. And you telling your life, was pretty cool. I'm madly uppin'...

Yo, what up... let's see, what can I say about this piece...
It was deep at certain levels... I like how you can take events in your life and display'em in pretty good rhymes...
Your flow is straight... and some of your lines sounded nicer than others... These are some that I liked... they sounded nice
"I went from, Bein' a lil' nigga runnin' from bitches wit cooties
To runnin' tha streets, Pimpin' tha same bitches for booty", "So I had no role that I could follow
Couldn't really live from tha heart, Cuz it felt my chest was hollow"
Good wordplay man...

I'm out, -1-

yeh a coo peice, u good at story tellin it all fitted in nicley from one part of ur life to anotha, i woz thinkin of writtin suminc like dis u'v beat me to it. line i woz really feelin....
"Could never really talk to people, So to communicate I started writin'"
dat line is a part of me, well done Mentill keep it up ill be readin tha secound part.
peace ~roX~

got..damn.To start off,dis had tha best story-tellin Ive seen in a hot minute.Flows r alwayz betta like dis,cuz it came from xperience so u knew xactly wutchu wuz talkin about.Its good to see tha ill ones postin again.Stay ^
-Avi

cool shit i liked it cool rythms and shit it was pretty phat keep it up dog

Thanks for tha replies.....I really appreciate them.....Peace

Blah....Uppin this for more replies.....Peace

This Was Str8, Stay'D On Concept From Beginning To End

Good Flow And Imagery, This Was On Point