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MeNTiLL 02-27-03 09:27 AM

...FeaR of LovE...
 
I used to stare at tha sky and wonder why I couldn't fly
Dreams of a young guy rejected cuz I denied a slice of Apple Pie
Id cry, I was hated juss cuz I didn't wanna live tha 'Merican Dream
Everythin' seemed like I was stranded on a log headin' down stream
Feared tha high beam, Afraid of heights, Thought I'd be carried by luv
But found it liked to shove, Never knew peace, Only seen fake doves
I was a few steps above, Hell, But many below tha gates of Heaven
It got worse when I realized, My luv used my weakness as a weapon
So I let it go, I didn't know how I'd be one to let luv grow
Couldn't come in precision wit tha flow, Thought I had it mastered....No
Tha signs tried to show me I needed my luv time and time again
Then I finally let go of tha bottle, And fell back in luv wit my pen

MeNTiLL 03-29-03 03:04 PM

Uppin....Peace

~RuThLEss~ 03-29-03 05:12 PM

YO Nicely done flowed constanly and contend was nice.....

Holla check mine
USA VS IRAQ poem

Bella 03-29-03 09:35 PM

that was nice

Couldn't come in precision wit tha flow, Thought I had it mastered....No
Tha signs tried to show me I needed my luv time and time again
Then I finally let go of tha bottle, And fell back in luv wit my pen


nice drop...

Narcicyst 03-30-03 10:03 AM

that shit was nice..deep and fulla emotions...every drop you do is iller than the next dunny...keep doin what your doin..peep my poem called talking To Myself...one

KeVLaR 03-30-03 01:27 PM

was nice... not bad of a drop.......

i loved the topic of this...haha... started of like this was bout a chick and shit...but ended up bout a pen and writ'n... haha...

I was a few steps above, Hell, But many below tha gates of Heaven

^best line...

you's a true lyricist...

*(chant'n...)*
mentill and pen sitt'n in a tree...
k-i-s-s-i-n-g.................

damn forgot the rest...........


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