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billy 02-27-03 02:36 PM

just writin
 
Constructed with structures and interconnected routes to develop a function of perfection/ accertained lessons through social and economical depressions form the internal image into a reflection of its progression/
sectioned out grids labeled with numeric codes/
individualizes certain areas and where the post goes/
it grows, as well as new theories and borders, virgin ideas and developments consistently exchanged like quarters/
disorder is constant in its prime years/
soiled streets and created pain cleansed by the rain like tears/
clearing near its completion of evolution/ although still claimed by pollution and false resolutions the sollution, still shrouded,
overcrowed streets but beliefs of continuation thrives/
lives were created with the city/
come with me and yull see visibly the inherent beauty/

MysticMastermind 02-27-03 03:02 PM

that flow was nice, a lil choppy thou, it is kinda hard to read it, need to listen but... had nice vocab too

billy 03-03-03 10:35 AM

thansks for the reply
keep peepin

Alias-C 03-03-03 06:04 PM

yo man, pretty decent, your vocab was nice, you flow... I'll agree, it was choppy, I can't quite narrow your topic down though, should have made it make more sence and a bit longer...
Good shit thougth...
Peace


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