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lastpoet703 02-27-03 03:14 PM

20th memory lane
 
neva forget where i came from. millionaire status 20th rd to the death

yo doo wop remember that nigga who slit his wrist up 20th block/
main cops bustin lump sums killin niggas collectin trust funds/
dunns supplied the marajuania never wanted to smoke just a aspect of reality/
when u see us we could be wiser than solomon but all u see is the skin color and a salary/
thats shit is fucked up/the system got us trapped/
2 ways to fight back/
take up arms form militias/
cops dont kill niggas no more were the hunters labeled cop killas/
thats a fast life with slow dough/
so my real niggas already know/
what to perform warmed up to ideas of enterin academic institutions/
started readin books instead hangin with my nigga hazam lootin/
cause we was poor when niggas like tony disrespected/
i was a quiet dude so the other niggas neva tested/
heaven knows my sins/
I'll begin at the end of the line on the road to the pearly gates/
gatekeeper decidin if heaven and hell is my fate?/i gotta go to heaven cause my niggas been through hell/
shells fell remember that black potential athlete becoming potential crackhead/
hangin around yes-men/
but yes men nod their heads down when niggas test chins/
to my nigga hazam get that money/
you a thirsty cat half a million where i see u at/
but this fake niggas want ur downfall/
two faced cats posin like aristocrats playin video games knowin their youth they cant take back/
to my nigga shinto we made it black/
from walkin to school to ownin are own apartments/
i couldnt imagine that their would be so much light after the darkness/

this dedicated to the real niggas tryin to make it. charlie horse, elshinto, my nigga hazam, (black step it up)
you cant save everybody ,yao ming

•Cist•M• 02-27-03 08:20 PM

props




respect




peace




•madd•

lastpoet703 02-28-03 12:53 PM

good lookin out. come on i felt that this was a strong piece. What else do yall think?

ParNun 02-28-03 01:04 PM

word this was good...i think your flow was stretched sometimes...but this was nice....i think the concept was dope....

good shit..... firsttime peepin you and i think this is a good first impression


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lastpoet703 03-02-03 02:51 PM

good lookin out. show love my people

poltreguist poet 03-02-03 03:04 PM

damn pretty dope drop wasnt feelin the flow but the not rhymin in all ya lines is sorta original damn pretty hot

lastpoet703 03-02-03 11:16 PM

i gotta improve the flow no doubt. make my words relevant while flowing crazy

lastpoet703 03-06-03 01:20 AM

uppin for more replies/criticisms


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