weed key PEEP MOFUKAS
 

20 bars on weed, u might not get sum cos im english
ima try and record it
sum crit cheers....



it’s the f..... a.... u know the rest/
and a blunts like a gun it put a man to rest
hit my chest like a pace maker, couldn’t live without it/
check my biography since 12 my whole lifes about it/
fuck.. dieing, kick the bucit/
suc it,little did i know the chilm was rusted/
now im dusted plus it infected me with tetnes/
heat rocks on my white shirt got it looking cheked/
wrec-ed im feelin lighter then a leper
then I noticed some dope shit 'spotted' it like a lepord/
grabeed my wepon smoke it oh shit, now im floatin-/
-stoned my tone prone to nock u off the high throne/
in the zone with a bong everlasting never pass it/
im blasted expand my mind like elastics/
weed like crystlnach smashing, the best
cos when u inhale it get shit off ur chest/
so hippies fill up ya dikies, get ur eyes red like a hikies/
switly takes the brain quickly, lookin shifty vison misty/
strictly smoke, the rock ses or if im rich sticky/
so put ya motherfukin blunts up an blaze with me/

u might not get sum words
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Not bad but you could definately use some elevation. You're right it was hard to understand you sometimes... typing in a british accent. Why? Also, a good sign showing a newbie is rapping about weed/being gangsta. You don't need help in your flow area it wasn't lacking much. Also a good way to get people to peep your shit is to NOT call them motha fuckas... good luck

pz

lol, nah its not a brithish accent just words u wont know like dikie bong and chilm
anyways im not a newbie im not just not deep lol