doing my thing
 

I’m the A to the L the E to the X, ya heard me
When I’m on the mic y’all don’t wanna disturb me.
Cuz my rhymes is lethal so don’t come to close,
Cuz I got that lyrical skill that can devastate most.
I do it raw, yeah you know who we are
That mad crazy smokin pimps that’ll fog out the car
It’s amazing, how we keep blazing, we’ll always be smokas till were shrived like a raisin.
Cuz I’m that flossed out playa, I represent the east side.
When I drive by, females wanna hop in my ride,
I said I leave your girl alone, but guess what I lied.
She was begging for this dick so I had to give it to her
And she so damn fine I just had to screw her. I knew her,
Once before, but you must have improved her,
You taught her well cuz she sure learned how to maneuver.
And she gave head like she had lots of practice
Niggas talk shit but them bitches match this.
Everybody know my flow is unstoppable.
All the time my rhymes is untop-able.
Niggas try to rock me, bitch I’m unrock-able.
Step up hoe, you’ll get knock back down,
When it comes to the rap game I got it locked down.
That’s it. I’m bout to quit,
Before I get my ass whipped for talking too much shit.

Get my ass whipped, see that could never happen
I’m just sitting here flowing, sit here rapping
Got the beat pumping, bass thumping,
My rhymes got the whole city bumping.
So get ready to do something.
Like jump in car, pick some hoes
Everyone knows, I got them mutha fuckin crazy ass flows.
And y’all bitch can’t step to this right here
I’m so lyrical potent, I got y’all kneeling in fear.
On your knees, begging please, won’t you spare me,
Get on deez and maybe we’ll see, I’ll spare ya
But say something I don’t like mutha fucka I dare ya,
I’ll run up on you so quick I’ll have ya screaming in terror.

let me know what y'all think

your shit was tight i thought it was hot read its the start to somthin

just chillin like we always do
represent the east side
wit bitches in the ride
you no we be puffin on the ly
spitin amazin shit and we just don't try
bumpin out the east coast flavor
niggas while out cause they cant stand our behavor
bitches while out cause they just want to slave ya
but we just want sex
and they want to date ya

so how you like that halla

^weak...

This had an alright flow but the bars sure were uneven so that kinda made it rough. This sounded more like something someone would freestyle on so it doesn't mean much in text... and on the net. Try to come up with more of a plot, plus rapping about "being iced out" is really played and gay. Elevate your skillz I see potential

pz