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ParNun 02-28-03 12:55 PM

Ho!
 
Yo, i know your interested,
in how ima leave you restin!

but ima keep you guessin,
for the answer ina question!

theres a Change of lessons!

cause by the way you stressin,
ill guarantee to have the next win!

here take a suggestion,
while i punch ya ribs so hard ima cave ya chest in!

ho's blow for doe when im broke but they're not learning!
givin' brain they come and go like the bus service!

round town the word is,
Nun's standing superb and hes not nervous!

hes as tight as a virgin,
handlin' words to hot to touch like a hot fernis!

Earning doe in block earnings!
On purpose, I bring magic but im not erving!

minimum wage 02-28-03 01:20 PM

yo dawg that shit was dope i can rhyme i just don't know the format i write fuckin awesome stories

lastpoet703 02-28-03 01:20 PM

but ima keep you guessin,
for the answer ina question!
that was nice. on the real
Earning doe in block earnings!
On purpose, I bring magic but im not erving
good
other than that it should have more content. you know

minimum wage 02-28-03 01:22 PM

i rap stacks in flak jackets,
highly improboble
me datin models,
reducing you to the,
lowest common molecule
going overseas,
to destroy g's,
ill give you a taste ,
so shut your face

minimum wage 02-28-03 01:25 PM

we should work together

I M gOnE 02-28-03 01:59 PM

yo...this was pretty nice. i see that u still improving. keep that shit up my nigga.

b ez

ParNun 02-28-03 04:08 PM

thanks everyone for peepin this shit....up

poltreguist poet 02-28-03 04:09 PM

i dunno i just felt that the bars were to short had a catchy flow to it but i just couldnt see my-self rappin sumtin wit lines this short but the content was awesome nice topic and shit good orinialty

nice vocab

give it a 7.8/10

ParNun 03-01-03 12:19 PM

ohh truu thanks doggy uppin

ParNun 03-02-03 01:01 PM

ohh truu thanks doggy uppin

supreme slayer 03-02-03 05:58 PM

im sorry to say but i jus didnt feel dis i dont know what u wre tryna say the subject was mattterless jus keep spittin and youll improve. peace.

ParNun 03-02-03 09:21 PM

ok up


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