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Daylight Robbery
got bored so key'd this:
I stop the car, pull up outside, no plates on my ride// got my partners by my side, one kick to the door, they break open wide// as we bust through the door, a shot in the air, everyone hit the floor// put a gun in her face, "you fucking whore, open the cash drawer"// this bitch best just obey, and do everything I say// cuz if theres any delay, I wont wait to blow her away// gaurd standin by the safe, just one, he reach for his gun// 3 of us react, a shell in his chest, our life sentance's begun// women on the floor start to scream, but this is my regime// my team just keep their heads, our minds focused on the scheme// holdin my gauge, my trigger finger starts to tickle// my crew we be fickle, on the street dont make a nickle// so we all hook up, try to get things to look up// in with our guns, out with the cash, try not to fuck up// leave no evidence when we bail, ain't gona leave a trail// dont forget one detail, ain't prepared to go to jail// some bitch start to cry, go over to find out why// she won't give me a reply, put my gun on her thigh// then she starts to halt, while we working on the vault// this shit aint our fault, just this bank we need to assault// just need the cash, then in a flash, up stands some white trash// knife in his hand, my throat he's tryin to slash, he cuts me, one gash// hit him with the butt of my gun, this shits only just begun// cuz this shit must be done, till my bank balance changes from none.// this bank we be looting, holdin back on the shooting// lookin for cash, we be rooting, crew be disputing// go over to my mob, ask what the fuks the prob// stop arguing on the job, leave it till after the rob// I'm sick of all this beef, giving me all this greif// they listen to me, I'm the cheif, they just the theif// we just broke through the locks, were into the box// fat ass diamond rocks, fill our pockets an our socks// we leave nothing there, every one of us got our share// people look on, they want us to share but we got nothin to spare// wearing Gods crest, dangling from my neck down to my chest// across the bullet proof vest, shit makes me feel blessed// then I turn my back, I hear a click then a clack, out pops a flak// out this heat that we pack, sticks in my back, am dead like pac// they got their own plan, to take out this man who theyre better than// turned and they ran, started up their own clan, running some legit scam// now I've bin sold, worth more than white gold, these mother fukers cold// but now so I'm told, they've always watched their back when they've rolled// |
MORE BlAh bLaH BlaH.......been done ova and ova an now once again....be orginal ...come wit some type of technique....like how bout a rhyme scheme, some multies or metas.....somethin
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could use a lil imporvement but it was iight i guess
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Quote:
u dont see the rhyme scheme? its AABB etc, with internals :) |
uppin', cmon wake up :)
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