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FaTaLiTy 03-01-03 03:33 PM

quick spit , rate .........
 
Yo this fake nigga stay full of shit like tooshies/
Tha glock 9 e'll really make you get wet like pussy/
i'm bout to cock back and put 2 in ya head/
and if the cops come i aint afraid to pump 2 in a fed/
cuz them hollow tips e'll tear a nigga to shreds/
and i got some shit that'l put you 2 ya bed/
On tha block husslin jars of that lethal/
bundles of coke , even that shit for ya needles/
the brickles of diesel/
that i distribute to the ppl/
a hit e'll make a fiend get high and fly like seagulls/
yea i feel evil, but to get tha dough i'll body any nigga with them twin desert eagles/
ya'll niggas get hit with tha all black cannon/
them shots is landin , in the middle of ya chest and e'll put to rest any man standing/
and foil any plots that you plannin/
and if i put tha heat to ya body i aint talkin sun tannin/
niggaz mad cuz i was wit his girl and felt her breast /
fuck around and send shots that'l melt ya flesh/
shorty gave me mad dome , so b4 you kiss her i suggest you smell her breathe/


fAtE

D-Dizzle 03-01-03 04:12 PM

This is aiight, nothin' that make a nigga go damn! but it's not wack. sound like a keystyle, they could be filler lines to a battle rap but nothin' that'll kill anybody. It's cool doe, keep spittin'

FaTaLiTy 03-01-03 05:35 PM

iight good looks , hit me up........

FaTaLiTy 03-02-03 12:54 AM

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AJay 03-02-03 08:56 AM

The flow was wrecked by the long lines you used compared to the shorter ones at the start.

"yea i feel evil, but to get tha dough i'll body any nigga with them twin desert eagles/
ya'll niggas get hit with tha all black cannon/
them shots is landin , in the middle of ya chest and e'll put to rest any man standing/
and foil any plots that you plannin/"

DisGangsta56 03-02-03 10:08 AM

dat was aight but u need sum work. keep spittin


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