Who's dat Nigga- open challenge to any1
 

off da chains while u tied to da fence
u fakin mo than actors while yo flow worth 50 cents
i don't battle divas they get beat down like pinatas
if u don't undastand english then yo ass don't want nada
this is a challenge to anyone if they dare
u can't beat me i'm like freddy i know yo fears
i'm half puerto rican cookin niggaz wit goya
i don't think u ready fo drama i got sumthin fo ya
hotta than california is my lyrics n style
my flow smooth like cristyle i'm known to get wild
if u think dat u ready dis fo da wanna be thugz
don't be sayin u holdin slugz when u gettin walked on like rugz
my lyrikal tactics is like no other u ever seen
i leave a trail of defeated mc's wherever i been
girls addicted to da flow and da looks i'm like a drug
by da end of da night i'm a call yo girl a bug
cuz she all ova me drink da cum right out da mug
i guess she left ya cuz u suck like a slug

who's dat nigga spittin' flow like whoa
who's dat nigga lookin like he gone blow
who's dat nigga all dem ho's wanna know
who's dat nigga makin g'z on a low

it's JQ, he's an F.U.B. souljah rememba dat i told ya
be ready or it's ova

not much wordplay.. well good wordplay... Was a decent lil verse, very outplaqy concept.. vocab was aight.. lines didnt flow together too well.. not bad but needs work, elevate..

aight dawg at least u ain't said it wuz wack. i can live wit dat.
i'm lookin forward to seein some of ya work. holla

im wit crook on this one it aint wack but coulda been better 1/10 its barely a 6. evaluate ya game use vocab betta word play and use metaphors. one

yeah that was cool, fell off toward the end but i do that myself so i can relate. the best thing to do is start writing your verse, then as soon as it starts gettin' wack leave it and go back to it another day.

best lines - the freddy one and the 'don't understand english' one