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Vennom 03-03-03 12:27 AM

2Verses
 
Cum through the box, start firestorming/
And fry organs, soon as the brain realizes talking//
Fry your carcass as dark as a neon coffin/
And have you coughing, throbbing for the inhaler in your pocket//
An un ordinary object with super vocabulary knowledge/
To freeze rappers to a super solidatary solid//
Freaking the earth like christ calling/
How many niggas will survive after the meteorites fallen?//
Polished in gold bronze-like armor/
Burried in the walls over your bed, spittin' rhymes about carma//
Fight your mind till your conscience is conquered/
Punish your body, kill your soul, and leave your carcass//
Scenery eventually turns to a scene of caution/
Added by fluids of venom and bodily toxins//
Just another body casket dropping/
For anybody on the planet who aint showing what real hip-hop is//
My flows suffocate the superior/
With super furious blows, strong enough the kill the web slinger//
Nefarious flows shake the interior/
Shake the plates off the concretes face, and release the inferior//
Causing world hysteria, droppin bombs that break the barrier/
With mass thrust, crushing ya own bones to burry ya///


Yo this sum shit i came across 6 months ago just testin the
waters for yall....tell me your opinon on this one

MC Illest 03-03-03 12:30 AM

some parts were hot, then it slowly drifted off into weakness. Keep postin

Peace......ONE

Rawdeadly 03-03-03 12:34 AM

You started out nice......


and thats it...u just started out nice
then you became another one hit wonder...just came nice the 1st time....hahaha



Peace...
1.......

Work on it trooper


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