the industry rhyme (more comments and less views please!)
 

True emcees are hard to come by these days, i leave every other rapper with a lot more than just a little graze, I'm out to influence like purple haze, got a smooth voice like Marvin Gaye. I dont have a bentley on 22's, man i dont even have tight shoes, im just poor emcee trying to get by in this world, and you hate me cause im the one stealing your girl. I dont have fortune and fame, but i got what 99% of rappers dont got and thats game, at best your verses are tame. Too many cats out for nothing but that record deal, and still talkin about how they keep it real. I'm not a millionaire I cant even pay the rent, but i know my words are well spent. I take words and mould them around my meanings like clay, you couldnt be me on my worst day. Most rappers spitting out swears and gang signs, how does that add to the quality of your rhymes? So what if you can get a man killed? Who cares how much platinum is in your grill? The only thing true hip hop fans care about is skill. So you cant smoke blunts and pump your system loud, all that will be gone once I steal your crowd, you best go back to the lab and learn how to spit and write and dont come steppin to me until your rhymes is tight. You amazed at how some broke rapper can take your money and your girls, its inspire and you know i rock your world!

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DON'T SLEEP!!! You Read his stuff, say something!

its simple but it does rhyme if you need it..
i do my verses almost like this if i decide to
put anything on here from time to time...
your sayin what many say already though..
nothin really new but it wasnt horrible...

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yo, check it man, this one's almost the same as your other post I replied on, once again your concept nice, still being truthful, pretty good rhymes, but the flow still needs more work thought kid, you should try that bar form cats is talking about...
"So what if you can get a man killed? Who cares how much platinum is in your grill? The only thing true hip hop fans care about is skill", see I like what u saying here, i feel the same way, but the flow is still a bit off, work on that man...

Peace

thanks for the comments, im just a rookie... i'll try all the stuff ya'll said