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KRISSKASS 03-03-03 09:21 AM

Salvation Army
 
LET ME INTRODUCE 100% OF JUICE THAT GETS LOOSE; A STAR

BURST FLAVOR; CALL ME A ROOKIE, BUT NOT A HATER

/ I LISTEN THOROUGHLY TO THREADS FROM COMMARAD M.C

HEADS NOW OR LATER; NOT SELFISH IN BEING THE BEST; I

KNOW MY FLOWS ARE SIMILAR TO DA REST IN THIS FREESTYLE

NEST/ I WORK AND PRACTICE AT IT; DON'T QUIT OR EVEN

GROW TIRED OF MOLDING THIS ART WORK OF VOCABULARY

OUTBURSTS DAT GOT ME FREESTYLING TO GOD IN CHURCH;

KNEEL DOWN AFTER A GOOD SESSION; CANT STOP THE URGE

AS I TAKE A BATH BUSTIN RYMES AS THE WATER HITS MY BACK/

EVERYTIME I HIT A PUNCHLINE, IS LIKE VOLTRON FORMING;

ATTACHING WORDS TO MY MIND; STUCK IN TIME WHEN

I FORM DA NEXT SIGN TO BEGIN FOR DA FIRST TIME/ LIVE

ON AN OPEN FORUM; I FLIP A DIME AND CALL TAILS AS

IT HITS GROUND TO SEE IF I WILL BE GOING UP OR DOWN/

DON'T MATTER SINCE WE ALL HAVE TO CLIMB THE LATTER;

I'M STILL IN SECOND, BUT I GOT TO HEAD HOME AS I BATTLE

SHAWN AND RAZOR RAMONE IN THIS MAIN EVENT/ NO THRONE

INVOLVED; ITS ME THE HOST LOOKIN AT A FLOW WATIN TO

GET SOLVED/ WHO MADE WHO, WHERE IS THE TRUTH; CANT

SEE ENOUGH; ALL RIGHT ITS COOL, BUT WAIT WHEN I RISE

AND STAND IN FRONT OF DA BOOTH/ I'LL BE SPITTN WORDS;

SO FREE TO SPEAK MY MIND; LOOK AROUND FOR AN ASSASIN

COMING BLASTING FROM BEHIND/ WHAT MY TOPICS SEEK

IS TO DESTROY THIS LIE; OUR STARS AND BANGLED BANNERS

ARE CREATING WAR FOR GREED/ ITS TIME NOW I FINISH

TO LET YOU KNOW WHY I REGISTERED; TO FEED OFF

OF M.C'S DAT RESPECT A MANS WORK INDEED; DATS

WHAT I ASK FOR; HELP TO THE RYMELESS POOR TO SORE

HIGHER TO THE ENDS OF THIS POLITICAL FIRE DAT ENGULFS

THE EARTH AS IT GROWS TIRED.....

MOLOTV 03-03-03 02:59 PM

not 2 shabby 4 a beginner,expected nuttin less from ya first drop,real simple as far as skill,n wordplay r concerned,but had a good point 2 it,n flowed good,so keep workin at it,u'll fidn yo groove,stay up,1

KRISSKASS 03-05-03 11:06 PM

Special thanks
 
I appriciate what you think about my work. i respect you and

all that treat me the same way.


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