9-11 (work in progress) Hit this post
 

i'm always staying higher than attacks by the al-queida/
the jet fuel causing fire and mohammed was the driver/
sniper roaming the the deserts of Afganistan/
supporting the attacks when your buying all the contriband/
their main exports include heroine and poppy/
I'll kill bin laden do a drive by in my Jalopee/
don't copy flying planes into our buildings/
you spineless bitch your killing women and children/
i'm a take Kabul, Kandahar, and Bagdad/
throw them in a grab bag my flags at half mast/
tourists gassed taking pictures of ground zero/
FDNY has become my new found Hero/
forget Dinero but never the date 9-11/
too many innocent people reached the gates of heaven/
we'd blow up your buildings but you need some to do so/
Sadam and bin laden more homo than Manudo/
history repeats itslef ask Sadam/
Fuck Iraq, Afganistan and the Taliban/
Fuck Iraq, Afganistan and the Taliban/
Stay Calm/
You need to watch and listen Bin Laden Had a vision/
Fuck the Al-quieda network stay playing your position/
he said he seen it the twin towers collapsing/
at 9 am on 9-11 i watched and started gasping/
grasping for some reason behind this discription/
started WW3 us against terrorism/
Bush give me control i'll end the war Faster/
I'll shut em the fuck down Like DRE did to napster/

gotta love it... its worthy of an ill and a dope this line was dope too
"I'll shut em the fuck down Like DRE did to napster"

zzzzzzzzzzz sleepers hit this post

shits hot

thanx but where is the breakdown i need some feedback stop sleeping

uppin

uppin this shit

zzzzzz common sleepers where's the criticism?

niggas keep sleeping thats why i'll rip anyone on this site in battles

that was hot shit man

That shit is fucken awesome man, DOPE, DOPE, DOPE, I'd had a look at this before and not really read it in full and didn't think much of it but I just read through it thouroughly and Dogg, this shit is sooo hot! Wordplay is nice, rhymin is very consistent, one fucken hot piece man.. ^^^Deep, meaningful and for real!!!!

finally thanx ya'll bout time some one peeped this shit

I feel ya steppin
flow was pretty nice
there were some lines you could of made just a little different and switched around to make sound better
but I think these 2 were cool
sniper roaming the deserts of afganistan
supporting the attacks when your buying all the contriband

yup, better believe your coming along nicely

WESTSIDE

YO SHIT WUs JUst SICKWITIT.....na'mean

FLow was 9/10......NICE
Concept and the whole shit went to the point......Good job
The whole piece i would Say TIGHT.....u got skills man..

Ama expect more sick shit from you.....

To be honest i think you people are over-rating this. Flow was descent, you stuck to your topic, but it looks like you only have 150 word vocsbulary in tha english language. Overall for a keystyle i rate this about 7/10.
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