Mic-nificent 2003 (Hot Spit)
verse 1
Uh, huh… Verbal Atrocities Manifested, Mic-Nificent 2003 Straight Out The Gates… It’s the attack of the meanest, assassin and genius// Why can’t these fuckin’ clowns just loosen their grasp on my penis// I’m rappin’ with demons to have you gasp when your breathin’// Enigmatic the only man in the game that’s lackin’ a weakness// As the passion increases, you’ll get laid in a casket with Jesus// The hatchet is reachin’ to crack your cerebrum; ‘cus you’re whack when your speakin’// Said you’re trashed and your beaten, blasted with semen, and now your contracting diseases// Play my tracks in a sequence, you can't tame the hurricane// The flames are burnin’ lames, and I'll slay your vertebrae// Been trained to murder brains, contain strains, stay insane, and snatch the chains of certain “gangs”// verse 2 Yo, yo… I get the crowd groovin’ with this foul music// Drop sick shit, like Oprah having a bowel movement// Loud new shit, Enigmatic the king, no one is comparing homie// Got a dick so big, all the bitches are scared to blow me// The new era is slowly, creepin’ up, then I slam foes// ’Cus I’m better than Rambo, when I shoot sparking ammo// I’m the type to “godfather” a blunt with Marlon Brando// Verbal commando, teams be stressin’ with this speech injection// ’Cus the only way they’d get bread is if their girls had yeast infections// Get beat with weapons, ‘cus my skills are properly funded// And I’m celibate in this rap game, ‘cus I’m not to be fucked with// |
yo thats tight son fa real i liked it alot remined me of Canibus nigga
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.Responding.
Good lookin' out. I was tryin' to go for a quicker rhythm. Keep uppin' this shit.
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.Sleepin'.
Don't sleep on my thread... keep uppin' it. Y'all missin' out on some hot shit.
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thats not to bad niccah.
you had a continous flow but some lines had no meaning. most lines was rymin but wasnt consistent enough. |
OKay....
THIS WAS WACK......nothing to make say "wow".... No sense like the fake ass mc above me said... example... "I get the crowd groovin’ with this foul music// Drop sick shit, like Oprah having a bowel movement//" ??????????WACK!!!!!! Example... "Verbal commando, teams be stressin’ with this speech injection// ’Cus the only way they’d get bread is if their girls had yeast infections//" ???????WACK!!!!!! work on it kid Peace..... 1......... Ps:......i hope no hip hop tours ever goes to D.C. u should never.....be inspired by rap....ever u wack bitch.... face it... |
... nah man... yous can't say that... whack!... nah... yo man, I think you got Dislexia or something^... reading the shit backwards and shit...
Yo kid, you actually came up strong on the first verse, had some nice rhymes, tight flow, good multies and shit, it had a good rhythm... but then u slupped a bit on the second, some of those rhymes didn't make sence... I liked this one though> "only way they’d get bread is if their girls had yeast infections//" that was a funny one... keep writing dawg... -1- |
yo, I liked it... which means it had some strong points.. but it also had some pretty fuckin' weak points.. you got the potential fo-sho but you gotta work on consistancy and such....
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.Raw Deadly.
I wanna know why this cat stays hating on my threads... can't give no one a positive thought. Why you hatin' on me R.D.? You tryin' ta battle, i'm up for it. Though, I ain't even seen any of your posts kid...
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