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Narcicyst 03-04-03 09:43 AM

Parcel
 
its open boxes sent to the postal noval office
boastful approach for boats loaded with profits
broken hearted from all these souls departed
this flow started when islamic men were chosen targets
blown up in markets
my lone static nomadic
no attachments no kin slow addict
movements my sedative
i sleep in areas that are embellished with
what the devil rellishes
my self prejudice forgetting the messages we precieve
leave the same fluid of the sea
touch my roots but never knew it
like members of my family truest
seperation of man from bad claims
you stand to blame for my main loss
a white ollared man slave you cant teach me
see i dont believe i belong to the human species
not hateful
for the gift of life made me garteful
take you to the truth
im from the same source that made you
of course youre too late to attach like flags to poles
my tortured poetic soul
thats why im glad we hold and feel no relation
know my procreation will lead you to the same slow erasure
imagine skin tones sperated from self like wool from razors
till your face is slashed
till youre enclosed in casing
thats my dilema
unequal see my people try to condem up
thru evil to see truth
but we always seem to
remind ourselves that we have no place to confine our shelves
embedded nations
universal with seperation we blinded fell
the parcel
we marked and fragilewrapped in skin come with a passport and a black file
we hostile
shipped across borders
to split us all into factions at the cost of lost order.....

Alias-C 03-04-03 06:54 PM

"the gift of life made me garteful
take you to the truth
im from the same source that made you", very sencire man...

Yo dawg, I've been peeping some of your spits a while back now... you really passionate about this huh, always with the same kind of topic, but still coming strong... it does get a little repetative sometimes, but hey... you got some strong reasons to do so... it's all good...
should work on that flow though... thas all, peace

Av1r3x 03-04-03 08:51 PM

evry post dis kid does its iller than da previous.Crazy spittin hea man,had sum nice multis and vocab up in there too.Major props to ya,do ya thang.Stay ^
-Avi

BlUnT-MC 03-04-03 10:16 PM

your verses are too short.. vocab is good, and it flowed pretty nicely..

Narcicyst 03-05-03 03:31 AM

thank for the feedback...i guess i'm a political type of rhymin kat...i got this rhyme in three verses but that was the shortest one...anyways i already produced it with a beautiful arabic beat to it...if anyone wants to hear it holla and i will hook you up...one


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