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Parcel
its open boxes sent to the postal noval office
boastful approach for boats loaded with profits broken hearted from all these souls departed this flow started when islamic men were chosen targets blown up in markets my lone static nomadic no attachments no kin slow addict movements my sedative i sleep in areas that are embellished with what the devil rellishes my self prejudice forgetting the messages we precieve leave the same fluid of the sea touch my roots but never knew it like members of my family truest seperation of man from bad claims you stand to blame for my main loss a white ollared man slave you cant teach me see i dont believe i belong to the human species not hateful for the gift of life made me garteful take you to the truth im from the same source that made you of course youre too late to attach like flags to poles my tortured poetic soul thats why im glad we hold and feel no relation know my procreation will lead you to the same slow erasure imagine skin tones sperated from self like wool from razors till your face is slashed till youre enclosed in casing thats my dilema unequal see my people try to condem up thru evil to see truth but we always seem to remind ourselves that we have no place to confine our shelves embedded nations universal with seperation we blinded fell the parcel we marked and fragilewrapped in skin come with a passport and a black file we hostile shipped across borders to split us all into factions at the cost of lost order..... |
"the gift of life made me garteful
take you to the truth im from the same source that made you", very sencire man... Yo dawg, I've been peeping some of your spits a while back now... you really passionate about this huh, always with the same kind of topic, but still coming strong... it does get a little repetative sometimes, but hey... you got some strong reasons to do so... it's all good... should work on that flow though... thas all, peace |
evry post dis kid does its iller than da previous.Crazy spittin hea man,had sum nice multis and vocab up in there too.Major props to ya,do ya thang.Stay ^
-Avi |
your verses are too short.. vocab is good, and it flowed pretty nicely..
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thank for the feedback...i guess i'm a political type of rhymin kat...i got this rhyme in three verses but that was the shortest one...anyways i already produced it with a beautiful arabic beat to it...if anyone wants to hear it holla and i will hook you up...one
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