for u pussies
 

ya imma wear protection/
ur a pussy with a yeast infection/
thats not it tho, u got the whole collection/
that two for one sale/
u gots the STD/
the HIV/
jus buy one and get one free/
bitch iv seen u at work/
u work of them poles/
wit all them other hoes/
just stripin of cloth/
fuckin every nigga that gets in ur way/
even if their gay/
still on sale...

that was really bad.. ya need some serious elevatin'.... longer lines, more complexity (lyrically, and in the rhyme), up the vocab a-li'l...

Oye Cuba my mang.......OK for a first time.....U have to work on making the words flow better and maybe alittle more content.....Try posting in the cypher section and work on your skills pana.......Holla

work on ya flow period