S'up. First timer here, check it out.
 

Wassup bitch, I'm here to say hello
I'm from the UK and I am a Juggalo
I like to skate, I love to rap
but I can't stand hearing this mainstream crap
Feminem gives us white rappers a bad name
I wonder what he's doin in this rap game
His Mommas a slut
his wife is a mutt
I'd rather cut off my dick
then hear this shit
If anyone wants to challange my personal views,
step right up, I'll see your death in the news.
Hope y'all enjoyed this lyrical greeting,
see you soon its been a pleasure meeting.

Much Clown Love,
SpiritofaJuggalo

AIIGHT PIMPJUICE,DAT SUKKED,FOR A FIRST TIMER,U STILL SUKK,4REAL THO.......U COULD USE ALOTTA HELP ON YO CREATIVITY LEVEL,N COMPLEXITY,DIS SHIT WAZ SOFT IS WHAT IM SAYIN TO YA,BUT U A BEGINNER LIKE MYSELF STILL IS,BUT DAMNIT,GET YO SHIT 2GETHA,UR FLOWS COULD USE ALOT MO TIME IF U TRYNA GET SUMWHERE,DEEZ LIL SHITS IS GOOD,BUT LAY SUMPIN MO OUT NEXT TIME,SWITCH IT UP,ICP WOULD KILL U 4 DIS BULLSHITT,STAY UP,1

first of all how could you diss on eminem/ he was driven/ not the best but unlike pac he's still living/ he's definitive and making mills of divits/ reached out for us misfits who were locked in orfaniges/ his lyrical optimisum kept me wanting to write to fill up colliseums/ put together broken pieces of freedom/ ever since i was a fetus/ i had my head phones on bumbing rap music/ you must be confused when ,8 mile killed ofice boxes' and em' was getting sued/ kim on the news/ I put on Rock Bottom and just cruise/ fuck jewels/ listen du' he's not my role modle he's just spits lyricle vodo

yeah that was jus shit dawg.. even for a newb that sucked. but hey keep postin and report to tha wackness emergenycy center dawg

^^^straight wordness, even for a newb that was hella bad, ur topic sucked, ur vocab and wordplay needs to be elevated, ur content and topic were hella played, so next time pretty much elevate in every way possible, just my advice though.

peace.......

catch me with my heat, its enough to sweep a super human athlete right off his feet/ blown out your sneaks ligiments on the concrete/ you remind me/ of a bitch with HIV/ seriously, literely, my caverly, rains tyrany, over your whole fucken city/ the first rap I was just going easy/ the reaper believes yall can eat your own fesis, my team puts shots to your splien and your knees until you stop bleeding/ I'm competing with mortals who cant beat me/ storm into your crib and steal your offspring/ then sell em' to R.kelly so he can eat them through their g-string/ shouldn't fuck wit grim repears/ i sport an ax and a heater, roll in a two seater, i got soldiers that do my dirty work/ so i don't get blood on my t-shirts/ don't worry it could get worse/ I'm talking tears, flowers, and a hearse/ yeah feet first/

Juggalo that stank like shit
dont diss eminem
you really suck
MAN
<~>

^^^how the fuck do u figure eminem gives white rappers a mad name? insane clown posse fucks wit white rappers, there r tons of worse white rappers worse than eminem, he is one of the best lyrcist of all time, i dunno what the fuck ur thinkin dawg, and i already posted, just thought i needed to say, ur ruinin the white rappers rep homie, so shut the hell up.

peace.....