CAMEO Vs. JAS THE SHOCKER
 

rules, dont really care
i guess 15 - 20 lines

i norm do 15 lines max
i'll use the drop i did against amend cos he aint replied and its a no show and i dnt want to waste a verse
post urs today or 2morrow-whatever

I ain’t no hand grenade more like a time bomb, blowing up on ur ass like a diffusion gone wrong/
Like Bruce Lee I have invented my own style of battle, imma tear u apart leaving remains like the US space shuttle/
A bat to ur head is like my fist smashing this thread, go back home and give ur lonely mum some head/
Turning ur eye-lids inside-out and rippin them off, pourin acid into ur eyes as if in the middle of a terrorist plot/
On the internet u check out ur hot-male, my lyrics obtain a grade A and urs get a fail/
My rhymes are fucked up beyond all recognition, imma take ur ears and rip them off so u better listen/
Like Master P u eat, sleep and rap a pile of shit, my lyrics send waves of pleasure giving bitches throbbing clits/
Launchin a strike of biological nerve gas, imma eat through u slowly so u can’t counteract/
Crushing ur jaw-bone so u can’t drop another verse, sendin u and ur lyrics to a cemetery in a hearse/
Like a naked flame u set me alight cos of my flammability, like a bulldozer I’ll snap ur spine and paralyse u literally/
Im an earthquake off the chart on the richter scale, in my book I destroy u cos im the predator and ur the snail/
Plunging u into the depths of hell cos my lyrics are scorching, like a rapist i thrive off beating helpless bitches like u unrelentingly/
Slitting ur throat to leave a scene so dramatic, this battle is gonna be over quicker than Einstein learning mathematics/

put the gun to ur head now, pull it plow
battle me how your strucken in my lyrics like wow//
i can get frantic and make your words sink like the titantic//
put the mic in my palm ill explode on it like napalm//
that wasnt nice to say what you said bout my mum
sounds like a dumb bum forgot to use a condomn
cuz he musta cumed up in ur mum after they shared a bottle of rum
and 9 months later you were what had become//
your rhymes is like chanting rant no bigger than an ant
n if you was a plant i'd rip you out the ground
like im rippen your vocals out your throat so ur unable to make a sound//
if you go rapping around town people gon look at you like a clown
the only reconition you gon get is a frown//
who knew you'd yourself tell that your rhymes come from hell
the devil no longer wants to be bad
he'll be glad jus as soon as you lose your notepad//
i tried to keep the lines around fifteen
and my lyrics somewhat clean but its jus routine
that when im done wit an emcee hes askin for morphine

the new voting system didnt work anyway jas gets the vote for better punch lines

i give it to cameo, more direct n personal

battle me cameo

i feel da same way^ just witout da battle!

my votes for= cameo

so whus the deal with this...

Much cleaner vurse... from cam...

Shocker I'm shocked you didnt stop with tha first 10 bars that didnt rhyme or make much sense....
but a few good punches....

ma vote go out 2 Jas cuz hiz verse had harder punchez, even tho hiz consistency waz off durin da mudde were he lacked a rhyme scheme, i thin hiz punchs were harder.


vote=Jas

Fixed records, moved thread.