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Adam 12
Life in da S.C is the same; Gangstas, Crime & Da Drug
Game;/ Our fault to use this social negativity is widely spread in this city/ No pitty for da nitty gritty laying on concrete ghetto streets/ Have you seen da other side of da rich and famous>?; You cant blame them to be where they terretory has a black angus, when we got dirty cops trying to shut us down for being free in this ghost town; Adam 12 , horsemen from hell/ They increase tension to put us in a cell as they laugh when they take out da strap/ Having full authority to pull the trigger; Just like dat, two thumbs snap; They could change da whole story of any injustice done to us by easily cuffing da cuffs and give fake bluffs to investigators eating donuts/ Dragnet , or should i say fagnet; Cops and Sherrifs going at it/ To protect and serve is their word; Shit, turn it around and its more likely were on da ground gettn served as they protect their own; Adam 12 cant stop, and cant mop da mess they left at home/ Fake warrants; used and abused to shake money loose off of a drug dealers pants and shoes/ These heroes in blue uniform are showin nothing but da opposite side when da camera aint rollin. ; Hustling, gambling, and punishing these men with short lived dreams; They have no other choice to sell da drugs to make their big bucks rise to pay rent in this city with a high unemployment rate/ But da pigs will neva relate; Instead they hate and make these people pay da price/ These flatfooted cops don't care of a families despair ; Its their job to catch criminals and uphold tha law for the safety of all/ They might be some cool cops and some may be busters giving you a hard time for their own good one; Its funny to fuck around with people less equal dan us rich white people/ Fuck around my town is a mistake; Dont wait for us to come out an play; Warriors ready to strike back non violent , holding it steady; Five O's get so paranoid by da movement of da body, each reflex is deadly/ All it takes for adam 12 to call help is one cut or officers shot; Yeah, its da way of the gun they go by so dum/ This is their job, but its also mine to keep word dat these pigs don't pull out tricks; I don't hate da fact that their job has to be done; Its the fear of them doin da wrong moves to get their stripes;crashing on small crews dat have no drugs and booze, fucked up shit by DA C.U's(Crash Units)/ I'm telling a tale of a chicanos face da has gone pale/ These crooked cops base their lives on fucking up ours,' Cowards and men with no honors/ The badge and the gun; The evil and legacy are da bond; Get whats yours and run before Da shotgun start shooting at any mexican moving suspeciously; Shit, i own da S.C like vercetti own Da Vice in Da pitty of This city; Aint no love in this gutter looking shitty/ |
good attempt but i wasnt seeing any real consistent flow, shorten the length of the whole rhyme... the spaces in between lines makes it looks like one bad mother to read... oh and work on your rhyme scheme.... keep rhymin
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I read about half... it was sick... I agree wit the topic, the flow was a'ight, vocab was descent,... uppin' this shit for sure dawg...
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Blunt MC Respect to ya
Thanks for da compliments my friend, i just appreiciate all
da support you are giving me by just one flow. i still gots a lot to learn and you helping me like you are right now. |
.Inspire.
I agree with my man Inspire, I didn't see any real flow... You need to work on the way you put it together. Otherwise, i'm uppin'.
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