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Evolve 03-06-03 08:52 AM

Wasted Battle Verse VS DLite
 
Not that it matters but this took me about 5 mins to write.. not that great but i hate wasting a verse.... FEEDBACK

dont quit your Day job, Grave Digger.. Dug yourself into a Hole
Moonlights as a Stripper, now watch him Slide Down the POLL //
Mellon is swole, Peel this Fag's Cap and make a Fruit salad
cant rap, but loves music & plays a mean Skin Flute Ballad//
lyrics aint Valid, like a Fake i.d... identify this Imposter
DLite got more Ties to being WACK then an Italian Mobster//
win?? i got ta.. I got Butter Fingers so im forced to Drop ya
couldnt Elevate to my Level by posting on a Tella-Prompta//
call a Doctor!! im Sick and this kid must have thoughts of Suicide
Jumping to Conclusions, on Wing & a Prayer he still wont Survive//
he's into Lies, Drugs & Guys... no Diguise, he's out in the Open
Im The Man plus Im Dope, so of course i got his Eyes & Veins Hoping//
looking & scoping, but i dont go that Direction.. change your Route
no reason to Look Up to a Win when you got Losing to Look Down to//
who are you, who found you?? what do you think these battles are for?
leave you in traction, Missing In Action.. P.O.W behind Bars of War//
left stranded on the Sure, Doubting your ability.. it makes me laugh
Bars go to War with this Dirty bastard every time he Takes a Bath//
save the best for last, but i posted first..so he got a case to make
Nothing to Waste, like a Starved Fat kid.. my verse Takes the Cake//

Evolve 03-06-03 09:36 AM

Upping cause people wont reply if its at the bottom.

MeNTiLL 03-06-03 10:23 AM

This was a dope verse.....Tha second bar gave me a laugh from tha jump off.....There were sum nice lines in here man.....Keep it up fam......Stay risin'.....Peace

AMEND 03-06-03 12:20 PM

Battle Me RICH......where u at?

Ghetto_Samurai 03-06-03 01:51 PM

^^^^Why does he wanna battle ya rich is he stupid anyway dis was a good verse i like da verse all da way down from where ya said call a doctor dat was ill all da way through....

DollaDimez 03-06-03 06:28 PM

it was tight, a little off in some parts but solid


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