consciousness
 

i thought men were supposed to be brothers/
its like we use that word right before we kill one another/
and then we blame it on the one above us/
like how can he let us kill each other all the time when he loves us?/
the world lacks a better structure/
if we try to keep peace with a gun untimly death will never be abolished/
we need to learn that we need each other/
to keep the peace so its likely that we'll breate another
Day
when will us people see?/
that it all started with greed to forcibly make another bleed/
hear these pleas/
if we think violence will keep peace then w crazy or too naive/
other than stupid hate where does a war come from?/
"we dont want no pain thats why we drop this bomb!/
and politicians be acting strong/
they get more power through this/
that why they wanna do this/
the evil few that do us
like the beating of rodney king
aint nobody got the right to abuse us/

Yo I though this was cool, it start picking up at the end and I was feeling you cuz I feel the same way about all this war shit. Used to be sort of a original concept but now more and more poeple touching on this cuz life is getting like that, so I won't knock you for not having something original. For as skill the way you put your / at the end of every line it makes it hard to see the empasis on where the flow is, and your word scheam is kinda basic. But over all it's good though
Keep spiitin'