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Mac Nino 03-06-03 07:41 PM

I Hope You Notice Me-Short Poem
 
I had this poem on another website.I hope you like this one even
though it's not long.Here it goes



You body is smooth like caramel,got my head spinning around like
a carousel
Your whole pressence on earth got me trapped inside of a jail cell,
you are a angel that saves me from going to hell
Your eyes are beautiful like a diamond,it makes a grown man cry when his eyes are blinded
If I said that you was special to me you probally think i'm lying,but
I don't want you to think I am criminal minded
Your hair looks beautiful like a ribbon in the sky,your love just gets
me high
All the bullshit and drama in this world won't pass me by,I just want a girl like you to notice me,myself,and I

Mac Nino 03-06-03 07:47 PM

Uppin for repplies.

Carlos 03-06-03 07:50 PM

dats tight cuz..... much respect to the way you treat da females...

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Mac Nino 03-06-03 08:05 PM

Thanks carlos.I apprecite it.Uppin for more repplies.

Content 03-07-03 02:23 AM

im with carlos on this one homie...i write all types of ish and at this point in my life im writin more ish like this...this was alright

check minez out if ya want..peace

Mac Nino 03-07-03 03:58 PM

Thankz content.Uppin for more repplies.


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