One Of My Best Pieces Ever!!
 

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writing poetry is expression, emotions/
that exsist all 'round even floating the ocean/
when I travel I write, it's usually at night/
cause thats when I'm most inspired, from the dark quiet sights/
I use my feelings mostly, written within the pages of my book/
that cushions the insainity, the sin in a nook/
I listen to "Pain" by Pac for my in-spiration/
listen to Highlife by Cypress Hill for verbal creation/
That you can't see clear fo the words that you don't hear/
There open wounds that neva eva conclude me personal fear/
My homiez down wit me, my lyrics, my flows/
for all y'all that don't know the rhyming glow that I show/
So, follow my lyrics for me and the Lords sake/
Don't ever be ovarate or hate my lyrics that'll intimedate/
what goes or stays, so PRAY/
all ya'll people out there stay clear from my way/
My peotic words plow down through a dangerous path way/
don't judge the right-the wrong-the words/
Cuase I'ma be the first poetic freestyle Korean influence when occurs/
for all of those that dont' understand the life of mine/
with a crecifix in the light, you can find out my life meaning; at the very right-time!!!/
Ya know what I'm saying, what you hearing from my mouth/
Everything is nonstop that'll send you 6 feet unda down south/
Ya see now that my rhyme can flow, can ride any rythem/
Will make you speechless just standing; standing flat out in denim/
This poetic freestyle is the the best of my best/
I've written many others but this one obsessed/
My soul lets loose my poetic determination/
which is the way I create poetic sensation/
I'm here to be a great inspiration to others/
Watching small peddles of intimidation fall and fludder/
Music/
one of the most important expression of feelings/
It blends realy well with poetry like chameleons/
Repetitive beats help me concentrate my lyrical fate/
Thats another thing that will also help me determinate/
what words from my mouth will create/
My thoughts have run out nothing else to rap out/
This has been my best like when I'm in tha ring in a bout/
But tha good news is there will be another one like this/
Except tigh-ter ryhmes and better lyr-ics/

man, this shit is weak, its too damn simpel, Upp ya vocab