alone in a corner (a homless perspective)
 

alone in a corner
i peer through a window
shiny glass pane
hey baby i see you
take off your clothes
while i shank my wank
dont call the cops
or my mind will go blank
im homeless you know
i never get off
so please please show
your tits and some more
i sniffed a can of paint
before i found this new sight
your titties are huge
itlll be a good night

was this song about a hooker cuse if it was whats with the sniffin???

hmmmmmm, I guess......do your thing.


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its about a homeless man peeping tom

yo stop posten these rideculous so called poems ur maken the section look bad u had some good poems but this is just retarded id say if ur writen bout a homeless peepin tom u might have some issues bt w/e holla bak 1

WHATEVER.. THIS SHIT IS GOLD

shit is gold ight.......fake gold.......peeping tom .....HA made me laugh

thank you... gold, fake gold?.. either way its shiny

Heh, made me laught...but also has serious points to it too...

...to say this aint poetry is ignorant...it's about a homeless man who, to stay sane, gets pleasures out of sniffing anything 'stimulating' he can find, which is a paint can..


..being homeless, he aint had some in a while...so out of desperation, and possible loss of mind (even if only a bit, or only for a littlw while) peeps into a window looking for a cheap thrill...

...i dunno what state of mind he wrote it in....dunno if he was taking the piss...or putting forward serius points using some sort of comedy form (satire i think..)....but it was a good piece...

...even though i felt he could've done more with it....at times seemed to be a bit too elaborate....

..respect...

I liked the poem it had substance in it's own little way