Skool
 

I allways paid attention at school,
Never broke any rules,
Kept myself to myself and my head in my shoes,
Did all of my homework and everyday whenever my phone worked,
I would call on my homeboys and get picked on by known jerks,
But one day I decided that I'd have things my own way,
And do what I wanted to do way back in third grade,
And teach those motherfuckin' suckers with no feelings,
What it really feels like-to get hooked up to the ceiling,
And laughed at-by everyone that happens to pass by,
What hurts me the most is no one stopped just to ask "why?",
I'm sick and tired of lookin at people and thinkin' -'I want to be them',
Finally got my chance but not allowed out at weekends,
So I stopped, my grades flopped and I dropped all my dreamin',
Focused my life-on retribution and scheming,
(That's in part two that will fol-low this evenin'............)

Seems like a set up verse to introduce the story. I remeber that cat Apathy from the Demigodz had a song like this where he was from the perspective of a bullied kid. Wondering how the second part will be, what type of new twist you gonna put in to it, being that it's kinda perdictable that you gonna get mad start flippin and shot up some shit. THis is aiight though rhyme scheam not all that advance though.
Keep spittin'

Yo what happened when do you post the second half don't get scared because of uppin it's time to end the story dog lets go.

reply to three other open mics and post link to your replies in this thread, or it gets deleted.
thanks.