fisrt drop but hot chec it
 

you see the name "light weight" in the corner,soon to be in the past*
its jus cuz im new dont get me confused wit your ass*
you could use a crew,but the only back up you got is in toilet pipes*
im performin open heart surgery while you still use baby wipes*
got you watchin me you think jus cuz im in skin tight denim*
you say you spit hits but i spit poisonous snake venom*
you got my "hot lines" saved on your touch tone phone*
hope you high in calcium cuz im prone to break bones*
make you dash real fast and crash before you even step on the gas*
ya swirve around curves wit jus words? imagine if ya tires were slashed*
ill flatten these cats and hood rats like that*
and when i go out "clubbin" it means i go swingin a bat*
dont get on my bad said even when im off the rag*
or ill have ya block lookin like a game of fuccin lazer tag*
you say you own steel but you steal what i say*
i gotta game you could play,called "whose line it is anyway"?*
you may have started the host jus like drew carey*
but strike one,strike two,strike three ya bloody mary*
you could call me a blender cuz i made this mix*
what you wrote dont flow like one hole wit 2 dicks*
i sting like bees while you bite like ticks*
dont take it a good way i mean bittin' lyrics*
your rhymin sucks like lips on clit,should rip out ur esophogous...think its sick?*
ill find out how many pokes and pricks till the center jus like lil kim in "how many licks"*


* holla*

dont take it a good way i mean bittin' lyrics*

I thought everything was really good up until there...

Did you say you bite? Straighten that out...

mmm more and more thug styles emerging... sorta liked it but i doubt you go out and do these sorts of things...
"and when i go out "clubbin" it means i go swingin a bat*
dont get on my bad said even when im off the rag*
or ill have ya block lookin like a game of fuccin lazer tag*
you say you own steel but you steal what i say*"
i think people should spit about what is in their lives, who knows you could be doing all that.. but if you did i doubt you'd be posting on the internet... the thug styles getting old... but i liked it anyways... the punchlines were good... just dope... gangster rap thats interesting... good work.. keep rhymin

Good rythem
 

Cool flow girl.. I give you mad props da same way

i give respect to pops//

p.s; keep on flowin

ya had sum nice punches up n there girl.But i agree inspire on includin more realism to it,na'mean.Not a autobiography;u can jus spit betta on thangs u actually kno.Stay ^
-Avi

thanks for peepin this and i hear what ya'll sayin i jus wanted to start wit a battle peice but ill get at you wit some nice shit next time aight i understand whatchu tryna say tho stay up and holla

Well. I really liked it, honest...But That last bit through me off...I quoted it in my above post^

It was a nice drop ma.The flow and wordplay was good.I know
you going to get betterso don't sweat it.Keep on shinning ma.
One

NICE one shawty......Prop's to ya.....

I'm a Ghost./

uppin this peice holla

still uppin ...holla

some good shit but i agree the end was rough

yeah this was a nice read

i mean it wasnt heaps original u see a lot of shit thats similar to this but then.......

i liked it

this was a nice one girl keep spittin the hott ish