Maku JaiiLiin the Omenys vs. Jaz tha Shocker(freestyle check it out, it's ill as fuck
 

here it is nigga. hit me back

rules:
1 min minimum, 3.5 min max.
no crew votes, dickrydin votes, bitin, hatin, etc.
due 7 days from this post(check tha date nigga)
first to 5 votes win. 3-0 is a win.

background info: it's a battle between me and Jaz tha shocker, but it also disses those who respect me not. It disses caustik, and individual. but it's a battle wit me and caustik

even if this nigga don't respond, i wanna hear responses from everybody on how ill it is.Maku JaiiLiin vs Jaz the Shocker

Post your input about the freestyle
 

post yer input about the freestyle, i'd like to see other people's point of view on it.

That was tight but be a lil more aggressive
when u talk shit about killin some1 say it like u really wanna kill that motherfucker

thanks. BUt mu'fuckas wuz asleep when i did it so i really couldn't get too loud. I feel you tho, i did need to put more feelin in it. BUt it was off the top, maybe i shoulda pre-wrote it.

Mane it aint even all that ill betta yet it aint even dope and it sound writtin but it was aight

Really wasnt that great... Flow needs improvement..Lyrics were actually kinda nice.. Quality is real bad, lotta pops and hisses.. couldnt understand some words.. elevate tho.. No emotion on the mic either.. sound like you talkin...Work on that and Ill be peepin ya shit, holla

eD

that was tight shit but i know it wasnt off the top kid, u aint gotta front, to much vocab and shit i dont care who u are u aint spittin with multi's and vocab like that off the top, was kewl verse, NOT a kewl battle verse tho. u got that mobb deep style to ya and a mc voice

Jaz the shocker takes the L
 

well it's been past 7 days, so i'm guessin this results in an L for that guy. Request for moderater to add that as a win for me.

I gave you credit for the win, and closed this thread.