where we live... why we kill
 

in need of inspiration, jot down a thought then erase it.//
faced with a barricade, barring me from creatin' anythin.//
tearin' veins, try'n ta get a drop of raw material.//
feelin' inferior, but still knowin' I'm superior.//
grindin' gears try'n ta think of a next line.//
I wish I could bend time, and take the curve back to bein' a child.//
no cares in the world, not worryin' about style.//
how I'm gonna get high, when my next friend's gonna die.//
but now it's like life depends on what color I'm reppin', 'n' I can't tell why.//
people say'n it's to survive, but wouldn't we get by better if we were all on the same side.//
not slay'n your neighbour 'cause he gave you caulk-eye.//
this disgracin' behavior's what's givin' the game a bad name.//
I'm not say'n we need to change, just kill all the rest.//
so it's just us, we been blessed with this talent and It's time to let loose on this establishment.//
challenge it, start a new kind of government, one where you do what the fuck you want.//
neva need a gun 'cause we all brethrin', all on the same side.//
all come from the same time, planet.//
we all strive to break the same bad habbits.//
so if we join forces and assasinate the opressing nature of the presidental cabinets.//
whatever we want, we just gotta grab it and dat's that,//
now all we gotta do is plan it.//

nice topic... on of those political/ clean our streets type of feel..

thats dope.

now with your drop..is was decent... what fucked your piece up was.. the flow to your bars

some lines just dragged to much.. and killed ya whole bar...

other than that it was ight...

yeah I agree with that.. It was pure writers block at the start, that's why it's kinda choppy... then I sparked an idea, but the block made it hard to come across properly.... thx 4 reply

i thought it was ill.. the topic like previously said and i agree with the bar comment.. but i thought it was nice