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thunder 03-11-03 09:36 PM

have i got what it takes?
 
truth scares me
how can it be
i know i'm blind yet i see
my spirit in chains
as my souls racked with pain
like a horse thats lame
just put me down
and if i rise again
then hear the sound
of the bass pound
just like a heart beat
would i kiss gods feet?
or would he tell me to rise
cos he despises me?
is it reality or a lack of symmetry i feel
would i share my last meal
if i knew what it was
or lie cheat and break laws
what are the new commandments
its outlandish
in the few moments of this ish
thousands will die their souls depart
families break apart
but i'm still hungry for money
and its strange see i find it funny
humorous and ironic not tricky
i have more than i'll ever know
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i appreciate comments

thunder 03-11-03 09:46 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/new...&threadid=33419

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6213#post316213

Emotion 03-12-03 01:44 AM

is pretty good

Low Key 03-12-03 09:51 AM

Not bad yo.
Poetic, should take it down to 'poetic scriptures' thread...
Keep workin...

respect.

thunder 03-13-03 03:17 AM

yeeeah yeeah yeeah

Emcee Juggernaut 03-13-03 03:19 AM

sup homie....that was preety ill....i luv the poetry.....mad props


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