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I aint drop a open mic peace in awhile.....drop some IN-cite.......dislikes and likes


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Last breath left of a man that's not afraid of death//
upset mind's get check, with the syrum from the chamber that will leave yo brain's eject-ed//
responding to the threat is, you getting your ego hurt like a male losing to a female in the battle of the sex-est//
i'am the "best kid", like the child to a women who only can get "once" pregant//
i been struck sickly in the brain and cursed with highly phonemial intellgent's//
diverse inter-changable thurst subliminal to hurt the worst of mind's//
dont bother trying to touch mine's, cause i'all 'rush' up on you nigga's like adreaniline//
and end up attack-ing you from the inside like venom, switchin the sympotom's with un-charted obolivion//
side effects: death-in-scribed on the prescription//
when alpha rippin pay attention"and read the small written's"//
every word i spit, sparks and starts igniting and causing friction//

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Art-or-Offical mentally damaging you, threw vebal-miss use,what you going to do?//
a hundred of you, couldn't stop the juice from braking threw the outter-skirts of your brain tissue//
fragment's from this sicken assassin will leave you strugglin and gasping, to breathe//
speaking past tense, you'll be a future has been, left with no family seed's//
damn terd's, alpha bleed ill word's, that emerge on the surface of curb's, that disturb the heaven's causing it to "split" like mitosis cell's on the braking verge//

nice vocab and multis in there..

this was a decent drop...

.. the flow fell off tho.. here and there..

and what made this kinda wack....was that it had no direction... it was going no where... just bar after bar... but it was decent for just a ketstyle type of thing....

keep doin the damn thang.

i liked it man.. very talented... multies.. vocab all up to the t... nice structure.. flowed decent.. props

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Appreciate the feed-bizack.....i aint dropped a open mic peice in a good min.....thanx for the reply's

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This joint was all right. Good use of multi's, the spit went of track a little in the middle. But it was hot... I liked how you used your vocab.