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Lowkey Exploration
Howdy, For Sale Is This Distorted Picture On A Broken Family Tip
Priceless Is Tha Frame, Tapped Together During A Moka Sanity Trip Tha Land Is Clean, But Contaminated Through These Diseased Pigeons That Leave High Lines An Edifice And Behold Tha Whole Fiend Image Motivate You G's With 24 Karrats On A Rod And Tame With A Stick Tha CIA Is On My Case And Using Snare Efforts With Basic Tactics Lactic Acids Build As I Walk On Eggs With An Ancient Beast Trailing Lately Trained In Tha Feet Of Failing With Night Dreams Of Damien Tha Omen Of Evolution, Life's Aim Is To Excell Constant Confusion Thank God I Found Myself Again, I Think It Was Lost In Tha Music Crusade Through Arks, And Abolish These Doleful Geometric Shapes Like 3 Dimensional Triangles And Lost Cities Beneath Pectic Lakes Pessimistic Views On Heaven Are Found Proof After Great Excavations Evidence Is Evident And May I Quote "Its All Sake's Explaination" A Motive For Being Fabricated Wasn't Present, Fate Is Tha Truth As You Interupt, My Mind State Is Mi-nute, Caught Breaking Tha Muse Back To Tha 80's Where Lettering Is On Tha Building Blocks Of Life Repressing Grim Memories, Being Shocked With Strife And Locked In Time I Visit Tha Past In Attempt To Make An Extensive Change Tha Day Tries To Cover Its Tracks As It Pretended To Rain Invented This Maze That Im Snared In, Without No Direction Tha See-Through Blueprint Wasn't Tha Labyrinth I Intended Tha Futures Impending, Ascending To Tha Apex Missing Hope A Catch 22 With Missing Net Profits On My Own Fishing Show Livid Cloaks Beneath Manifestations And Heavenly Bodies So What If I Can Label Each Train, I Still Have Around 70 Hobies As Life Catches Up With You, Increase Your Pace With Extended Legs Tha Final Words Spoken For My Brother Are Expired With Eclectic Breath Deceptive When? As Im On Tha Straight And Narrow And Living Honest? His Final Request Was Enough To Be That Of A Bleeding Promise Dreams, Your Feeding Off It, Homage Tha Imprisionment Of Existence Tha Shackles Of Past Times Were Once Lifted By A Lonely Christian |
Damn it's been a while kidd, let me see what I can get out of this piece...
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Once again your vocab and flow coincided nicely here, I miss reading your pieces with that structure to it, nice lines kidd, intro was nice and smooth, the piece flowed well to it, Quote:
Nice internals displayed here kidd, the imagery was nicely done too, I cannot find any real problem in this piece, overall you had most of the piece on point, I cannot really break it down like I wanted to cause I am tired as hell, but just giving you a heads up and this post was laggin behind... love... |
damn this dudes reply was long wnough to be a chapter in the bible... i agree though... nice shit....
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Yo shit is very nice man, I like yo material man, I was very impressed with your Book of Kismet and u backin that shit up well.
Good Wordplay, Rhyme scheme was pretty good and vocab was high quality, overall, this shit is dope! Peace Out!!!! |
Yo Rhom..Sup Bro.?
Thanks For Tha Replies.. |
what up man, haven't been here in a while...
This is the first thing I'm checking out and it looks pretty hot, vocab was nice, and the flow was nice n smooth here... maybe it's because I'm kinda sleepy ovah here, but some of this didn't make sence to me... I mean it probably does make sence to you, cause i know you wouldn't write something that didn't mean anything... but I find it somewhat complex... it's like I have to analyze it to get all of it... lol... guess I'm in the mood for something simple... Much props to you man, rhymes and wordplay was tight... Peace |
good to see the king of open mic still droppin the skill
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