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N-Demik 03-12-03 06:20 PM

Lowkey Exploration
 
Howdy, For Sale Is This Distorted Picture On A Broken Family Tip
Priceless Is Tha Frame, Tapped Together During A Moka Sanity Trip
Tha Land Is Clean, But Contaminated Through These Diseased Pigeons
That Leave High Lines An Edifice And Behold Tha Whole Fiend Image
Motivate You G's With 24 Karrats On A Rod And Tame With A Stick
Tha CIA Is On My Case And Using Snare Efforts With Basic Tactics
Lactic Acids Build As I Walk On Eggs With An Ancient Beast Trailing
Lately Trained In Tha Feet Of Failing With Night Dreams Of Damien
Tha Omen Of Evolution, Life's Aim Is To Excell Constant Confusion
Thank God I Found Myself Again, I Think It Was Lost In Tha Music
Crusade Through Arks, And Abolish These Doleful Geometric Shapes
Like 3 Dimensional Triangles And Lost Cities Beneath Pectic Lakes
Pessimistic Views On Heaven Are Found Proof After Great Excavations
Evidence Is Evident And May I Quote "Its All Sake's Explaination"
A Motive For Being Fabricated Wasn't Present, Fate Is Tha Truth
As You Interupt, My Mind State Is Mi-nute, Caught Breaking Tha Muse
Back To Tha 80's Where Lettering Is On Tha Building Blocks Of Life
Repressing Grim Memories, Being Shocked With Strife And Locked In Time
I Visit Tha Past In Attempt To Make An Extensive Change
Tha Day Tries To Cover Its Tracks As It Pretended To Rain
Invented This Maze That Im Snared In, Without No Direction
Tha See-Through Blueprint Wasn't Tha Labyrinth I Intended
Tha Futures Impending, Ascending To Tha Apex Missing Hope
A Catch 22 With Missing Net Profits On My Own Fishing Show
Livid Cloaks Beneath Manifestations And Heavenly Bodies
So What If I Can Label Each Train, I Still Have Around 70 Hobies
As Life Catches Up With You, Increase Your Pace With Extended Legs
Tha Final Words Spoken For My Brother Are Expired With Eclectic Breath
Deceptive When? As Im On Tha Straight And Narrow And Living Honest?
His Final Request Was Enough To Be That Of A Bleeding Promise
Dreams, Your Feeding Off It, Homage Tha Imprisionment Of Existence
Tha Shackles Of Past Times Were Once Lifted By A Lonely Christian

Rhombus 03-13-03 01:38 AM

Damn it's been a while kidd, let me see what I can get out of this piece...

Quote:
Howdy, For Sale Is This Distorted Picture On A Broken Family Tip
Priceless Is Tha Frame, Tapped Together During A Moka Sanity Trip
Tha Land Is Clean, But Contaminated Through These Diseased Pigeons
That Leave High Lines An Edifice And Behold Tha Whole Fiend Image
Motivate You G's With 24 Karrats On A Rod And Tame With A Stick
Tha CIA Is On My Case And Using Snare Efforts With Basic Tactics


Once again your vocab and flow coincided nicely here, I miss reading your pieces with that structure to it, nice lines kidd, intro was nice and smooth, the piece flowed well to it,

Quote:
Tha Omen Of Evolution, Life's Aim Is To Excell Constant Confusion
Thank God I Found Myself Again, I Think It Was Lost In Tha Music
Crusade Through Arks, And Abolish These Doleful Geometric Shapes
Like 3 Dimensional Triangles And Lost Cities Beneath Pectic Lakes
Pessimistic Views On Heaven Are Found Proof After Great Excavations
Evidence Is Evident And May I Quote "Its All Sake's Explaination"
A Motive For Being Fabricated Wasn't Present, Fate Is Tha Truth
As You Interupt, My Mind State Is Mi-nute, Caught Breaking Tha Muse


Nice internals displayed here kidd, the imagery was nicely done too, I cannot find any real problem in this piece, overall you had most of the piece on point, I cannot really break it down like I wanted to cause I am tired as hell, but just giving you a heads up and this post was laggin behind...

love...

incoragable 03-13-03 01:42 AM

damn this dudes reply was long wnough to be a chapter in the bible... i agree though... nice shit....

Orikle 03-13-03 04:16 AM

Yo shit is very nice man, I like yo material man, I was very impressed with your Book of Kismet and u backin that shit up well.
Good Wordplay, Rhyme scheme was pretty good and vocab was high quality, overall, this shit is dope!

Peace Out!!!!

N-Demik 03-13-03 12:51 PM

Yo Rhom..Sup Bro.?

Thanks For Tha Replies..

Alias-C 03-13-03 08:02 PM

what up man, haven't been here in a while...
This is the first thing I'm checking out and it looks pretty hot, vocab was nice, and the flow was nice n smooth here... maybe it's because I'm kinda sleepy ovah here, but some of this didn't make sence to me... I mean it probably does make sence to you, cause i know you wouldn't write something that didn't mean anything... but I find it somewhat complex... it's like I have to analyze it to get all of it... lol... guess I'm in the mood for something simple...
Much props to you man, rhymes and wordplay was tight...

Peace

MicDareall 03-13-03 08:18 PM

good to see the king of open mic still droppin the skill


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