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ninemillimeter 03-12-03 10:07 PM

Subliminal Criminal Rap!
 
I'm'a, subliminal criminal keeping to the minimal
Violent as hell putting razor blades in swimming pools
Water bleeded red like slit wrists, fuck it's cool
Oh yeh I also love the five finger discount in malls
Dont forget about them, there really great
Especially when you degrate the owner before steeling eight
Of anything a minithin, dont do nuffin' light these days
Go on be crazed, get out two glocks out and fuckin' spray
Thats what I do thats what I said, cause i'm sick in the head
Non of you fuckin' shoppers thought you'd be dead
Getting filled with hot lead, straight from my fuckin' gun
Could be a berretta, glock, tec9, or even little ones
I got a lot of ammo so it dont matter what
Your still gonna get shot even if you try to stop me or not
Cause I could randolmy attack you from every angle
Bullets flying everywhere when they hit they choke and strangle
Then take ya to the woods, tie ya up and have ya dangled
Like a candle on a mantle you screeming and hanging by a handle
Or i'll punch you in the nose till ya whole face explodes
Or pull back a shotgun fire body on to my clothes
Forenzics looked at the body and noticed 6 missing toes
Well I had some fun loaded a gun, and shot at some ho's
And thats the kind of shit that happens in my everyday life
Just make sure when it happens you know the wearabouts of your wife



nicked some of eminem's stuff in parts, lol
I written this years ago, this was one of my very first raps, i was about 13!

Please tell me if you think this is good or not. Thanks, ninemillimeter/9MM

inspire 03-13-03 02:35 AM

thug style = old, played, wack, uncool... whatever you wanna call it... spit about topics with some originality instead of how you "cap foos with yo nine" and stuff like that... keep rhymin

thunder 03-13-03 08:15 AM

i dont really think this is good

u dont kill ppl

u probly only ever stole a pen from your teacher


ninemillimeter 03-13-03 10:30 AM

lol, no i aint killed no one. This is one of my very first raps, when I was a teenager in my own zone, where I wanted everyone killed and I hated everything. I suppose you guys all remember that yourselves.

Farenheit 03-13-03 11:51 AM

it was said in the 1st 2 replies and never bite frum any-1 cuz thats wack as hell, hope u dont do that shit nowdays......


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