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up and comin' newbie....peep this..
listen to these rhymes, they are like voodoo curses/
curse verses like a wicked witch from of the West/ now that's murderous/ do you think that you can really spit rhymes like me/ I'll make your rhymes sound like a muthafuckin' castastophe/ listen to me / you know you can't become an emcee like me/ you don't know the difference from a gorilla or chim - pan - zee/ so sit down and write some words that make some goddamn sense/ making people dense up at the consequence/ from the suspense that you hear from this verbal offense/ show some defense / you muthafuckin' punk/ your voice box shrunk, now you sound like a small ass chipmunk/ listen' up! on how I rhyme about true hip hop/ spittin' rhymes that won't flop but will stay on top/ and overtop those whack emcees that drop from the top/ rhyming before I learned my ABC' and 123's/ I've been taking out emcee's one by one, can't you see?/ that I'm young and trying to learn the game/ it's a shame that some with the fame don't even know the game/ dont' want to mention their names but I got to say/ that my game is hard like the Bucs and Green Bay/ |
no, this sucks.......elevate
-OuT- |
at the beginning it was off... but at the end you started to pick up there... you a newbie but hey... you got raw talent... keep rhymin...
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shit aight, for u startin out.. some nice lines
more vocab make it sound better though, lookin foward to seein more of your work.. just elevate abit peace out... |
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