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.Introduction to E.
This is an intro., for all the niggas who don’t know…
Yo I’m gonna clash the bars verbally fightin’// Greek mythology, war, clash of the titans// In any battle field I hold a flawless victory// I’m literally the definition of God - M.C. history// Absurd my competition is heat, like arson crimes on unsolved mysteries// (Switchin’ the Flow Up) My thoughts are higher then the earth's heights// I act like if the mic was wooden, ‘cus bitches rhymes I take in and eat quickly like 1 million termites// Ground breaking flows that throttle your mind// Pushing back my victims, then a “prodigy's” hair line// So cold hearted you’d think I spit severe cases of extreme hail// Sending my attacks as atomic bombs on AOL saying, "YOU GOT MAIL”// I’m not a turtle, but with clips I unload shells// Dip the bullets in gasoline and watch your body literally combust in Hell// My thoughts are deep and dark like the bat cave// With as much flames as I spit, I take the name from Method Man and you can call me Johnny Blaze// |
nice sims.. flow was good n layout was alright.. some parts didnt seem to go, just had a word to rhyme.. maybe i didnt see it ??
keep spittin.. peace out... |
yeah nice layout flow was good
jus work a bit on the wordplay an vocab was still a nice drop keep spittin 7/10 |
it was ok, u need better word-play like most have said.....
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.Wordplay.
Do y'all know what wordplay is? Or do you just see other people's post and use their words? It's all good though... thanks for uppin'...
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I think that's what they are doing.. shit, they all copied uni-fire.. fuckin' jokes.. ne-way dawg.. some straight shit. I liked the flow on the first style better, was more simplistic so it was way easier to follow.. when you changed it up, It still had a good flow, but I'm really sketched from a 2 day e-binge, so I couldn't read it fast enough... but as for your word play, there really wasn't much but it was sick, the not really any crazy multies, but whateva right.. uppin' this fo-real
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