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Enigmatic 03-14-03 09:27 AM

.Introduction to E.
 
This is an intro., for all the niggas who don’t know…

Yo I’m gonna clash the bars verbally fightin’//
Greek mythology, war, clash of the titans//
In any battle field I hold a flawless victory//
I’m literally the definition of God - M.C. history//
Absurd my competition is heat, like arson crimes on unsolved mysteries//

(Switchin’ the Flow Up)

My thoughts are higher then the earth's heights//
I act like if the mic was wooden, ‘cus bitches rhymes I take in and eat quickly like 1 million termites//
Ground breaking flows that throttle your mind//
Pushing back my victims, then a “prodigy's” hair line//
So cold hearted you’d think I spit severe cases of extreme hail//
Sending my attacks as atomic bombs on AOL saying, "YOU GOT MAIL”//
I’m not a turtle, but with clips I unload shells//
Dip the bullets in gasoline and watch your body literally combust in Hell//
My thoughts are deep and dark like the bat cave//
With as much flames as I spit, I take the name from Method Man and you can call me Johnny Blaze//

unifire 03-14-03 09:52 AM

nice sims.. flow was good n layout was alright.. some parts didnt seem to go, just had a word to rhyme.. maybe i didnt see it ??
keep spittin..
peace out...

maXimus 03-14-03 10:27 AM

yeah nice layout flow was good

jus work a bit on the wordplay an vocab

was still a nice drop keep spittin 7/10

Farenheit 03-14-03 11:01 AM

it was ok, u need better word-play like most have said.....

Enigmatic 03-14-03 01:05 PM

.Wordplay.
 
Do y'all know what wordplay is? Or do you just see other people's post and use their words? It's all good though... thanks for uppin'...

BlUnT-MC 03-14-03 01:35 PM

I think that's what they are doing.. shit, they all copied uni-fire.. fuckin' jokes.. ne-way dawg.. some straight shit. I liked the flow on the first style better, was more simplistic so it was way easier to follow.. when you changed it up, It still had a good flow, but I'm really sketched from a 2 day e-binge, so I couldn't read it fast enough... but as for your word play, there really wasn't much but it was sick, the not really any crazy multies, but whateva right.. uppin' this fo-real


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