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Kalahari15 03-14-03 03:25 PM

Aids infested
 
whats this someones tryin to murda me
all i did was fuck his girl now he makin a run at me
i dont know what to do/ im sorry dude ya bitch gave me aids and im not mad at you/so what she gave you herpes?
sayin u were hurt/nigga my dick is burning
how tha fuck am im sorry,my kids are comin out retarted
its all my fault shouldve never drank two bottles of bacardi
on 2nd thought im under-age why didnt they card me?
these niggaz need to do they job B,im up here pissing black fluid on the car seat /help call a doctor i need a ambulance/its feels like a thousand fire ants in my rocawear pants/biting my nuts off
oh now your sorry?where is she ima fuckin kill her/her mom told her not to fuck wit these damn drug dealers/whydidnt she listen/now her whole family ending up missing,wit no possible clues whats the fuck wrong wit u?
"Im sorry dude"
to late im comin after you



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Orikle 03-15-03 01:19 AM

Alright man, nice concept, good to write on an actual subject but it was really hard to follow dogg, u gotta reset yo layout completely coz either it didn't rhyme and I lost flow in half of it or I just couldn't make out what u was doin coz it was set out bad, but you can elevate on this shit, its aiight.

Peace Out!!!!


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