LaRyan Shabaz vs. fgee
 

remade thread for name vs. name principles.

My verse. Initially fgee spit first.

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Generally, you challenge someone in Bitch Slapped...

Just one look's all it took, you shook off the hook like minnows from Chinook/
Regionalized? Shit, my place is in your lady's thighs. Hear her cries?/
This is your demise, I surmise, "gee" will die from "f"ing guys/
Systemized pattern of generalized rhymes in your spit, *yawn*, look he called my mom a bitch!/
Proceed with sheez and call me dumb, I grow tired of this forum being overrun with the word "mum"/
"Aha!" you're from Scotland! Just stop man, trying to "Take On Me"/
Though Fat Bastard you no be, fgee is smaller than Jermaine Dupri, over steering wheels you can't see/
Your country's cuisine is gross, and this is really taking rap East-Coast to the most!/

Cmon little guy, I'll give you a nursery rhyme to get off to beddy-bye.

Hickery-Dickery Dock—don't mock. I'm hard as a rock with no "fucking flock"/
So fuck a cocked glock, I'mma dock this one in ya mouth and get it shot like you's a sweat sock./

Fin.

LaRyan some of the shit u type makes u sound like a retard/
but it's not ur fault that ur not smart/
u being born was an accident cos ur dad meant to wear a rubber/
but he was drunk that nite and 8 months later u popped out a scrubber/
u were a premature baby and shoulda been aborted/
they say ur brain damage is from the coke ur mum snorted/
she's like the village bike everyone's had a ride/
i declined her cos she's so ugly and i'd rather kill myself with cyanide/
when i get on stage with my mic and cord/
its like chopping and slicing with my samurai sword/

this was supposed to be a ten bar dis


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Phatter than ur Mum

Upping for votes and comments.
Please.

vote= shabaz, he had nicer flow and better punches

vote- shabaz tight rhyme good use of vocab had harder punches and disses overall just a better flow and rhyme holla bak 1

ya i'm feelin x, dat shit was betta than fgee who eva rhyme. sorry homie but...

my vote=laryan

Thanks voters. I'd like to get some official ones in here too, though.
Uppin.

I voted fairly in tha polls...

L.S. got this for better verse over-all... nothin' else to say..

peace

you both suck

Thank you Shanks.
Fuck you iNtERnEtGAnGstEr21. Free posting, six post ass.
Uppin'

vote- LaRyan

he had a beta flow n harder punches

vote=shabaz

lol. You guys prolly think i'm a hater by now. I'm just used to seeing ill shit. So when i'm constantly seein garbage, i'll point it out. both verses were forgettable and corny. but shabaz did have better punchlines than his opponent so I award him wit my vote.

records updates.
shabaz wins.
closed.