Slim Lanky -v- Kracka
 

16 bars
due midnight tomarrow

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checkin aswell i will post very shortly

Here we go again another chumb trying to match these skills//
Kracka stop tryin to kid, we know you take viagra pills//
Your dick has been limp since you were the age of ten//
Writin down shit raps with your dollor ball point pen//
Your middle name is Welfare, and you live in cardboard box//
Your hobbies are pickin up cans and sucking big cocks//
Well stop tryin to kid you cant match this shit//
Ill be all over you, so why dont you call it quits//
They need to make a story about your pathetic life//
Throw it on E! and subtitle it "The butter knife"//
Kracka, what are you some kind of fake//
Messin with me, that is your biggest mistake//
Because if i saw you on the street youd be sorry//
It wouldnt be your birthday and we wouldnt be sippin bacardi//
I would have you on the ground in 2 point 2//
Poor faggot quit because your rap battles carrer is overdue//

Im out

Welcome to the first and last battle of your MC career //
You have just set forth on your final frontier //
You will learn not to step again to this Kracka //
Cuz your a rookie, just a stupid fudge packa //
Boy you cannot rap, You don't even know how to start //
You are a welfare bitch who be loadin boxes at K-Mart //
And will never stand on stage your just a wannabe //
In 2 years you'll be on that show on MTV tryna be like this emcee //
Cuz when I rhyme I hit the hole in one more than a man named Tiger //
If the mic were a ball, You dribble it off your knees more than Matt Geiger //
You can't make the crowd say woah cuz you ain't got no flow //
This battle is like murder and im'a be the inmate on death row //
Thinkin you belong on the same stage is me, you must be confused //
Bitch, just like Jason Kidd's wife you are going to get abused //
If you want to walk again it's not too late to retire//
Otherwise, it'll be The Station part 2 and youll go up in fire//

Aight we both went, so please vote, im sure it wont be too hard ;)

...this was a boring battle...but is vote for kracka his verse came harder than slims but still...nothin stuck out...but w/e ma vote goes to kracka holla bak 1

Ok thanks.... If you have any advice on improving id loveto hear it

also i think this was a boring battle, u both need to come alot more origional with ish no-1's ever heard b4 (always gets peeps thinkin ure dope), other than that word-play needs improovin from u both and multies too...

my vote also goes to kracka, better verse better punches...

pzzz....

i'm feelin what x said, da shits was borin but....

my vote=kracka

What do you mean multis?

filthy are you a registered voter?

We need a vote plz

Will someone please vote.... we need atleast 1

uppin