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incoragable 03-15-03 12:57 AM

just a quick write down
 
my rhymes are as rancid as punk with sid sittin vicious
i would de-pants a monk in front of ten different bitches
when i flow you need protection from obsession
12 step programs with 3 flight extensions for comprehension
stop the tension i wont hurt your ego beyond family recolection
secs are flexin with fears of the mention of my ressurection
jesus without the sacrifice, born once dies twice
from a wak ass flow i heard you spit tonight
watch me rip the mic with all my might carryin a bag full of kryptonite
i can lick the knife with a tounge this sharp
sick of life waitin for my wings and harp
ridin the pale horse with a bleeding heart
lookin for you, the wak emcee that killed it from the start

Orikle 03-15-03 01:22 AM

Flow was good, some nice rhymes too, Not bad for a quicky ay dogg.. expand yo skills and put it into writin on a full subject.

Peace Out!!!!

incoragable 03-15-03 05:46 PM

thank you


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