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Tha Dead Pool
Deep thoughts, inside hell's box is da cause/
Don't no if i should press start or pause/ Cant applause, waiting for the mouse , noises in my house/ Arroused by chaos and mayhem, open gap space like strahan/ Stuffed inside my own mind , deaf and blind pitted/ Its a sign of the crime committed, armbarred submitted / Head splitted, i lied when i know i did it/ Their can be no peace, no cure for da desease, / Nothing stopping this force, homicides dat increase/ No pain or ease, brain frosted wit freeze / Deadpool rises as the people live on their knees/ Land for lease is killin trees that help us breathe/ Feel dat heat, coming from da beast , white devil's meat/ yeah Deadpool filled like bags of kandy from tricking us treat/ Left silenced wit no beat, i unleash thunder to da streets/ System has me running, Devils stuck to their seats / |
i like this, it took a while to get the flow going, but vocab was good......keep it up
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yeah nice vocab and i like all the different messages you send.
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oooooooo! this is one of those complex ones... what I mean by that is that the messege isn't exactly clear, the rhymes where sort of simple, but like I just said the overall messege is a bit unclear... I started reading it and I just kept going cause it looked interesting... shit was pretty dope, pretty short though, good flow too...
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Yo Alias is true man, still do't really know what yo were talkin bout, yeah, flow wasn't reslly there at the start but you really got into it on this line:
Its a sign of the crime committed, armbarred submitted / Head splitted, i lied when i know i did it/ Thats nice there dogg, keep it up! Peace Out!!!! |
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