Tha Dead Pool
 

Deep thoughts, inside hell's box is da cause/

Don't no if i should press start or pause/

Cant applause, waiting for the mouse , noises in my house/

Arroused by chaos and mayhem, open gap space like strahan/

Stuffed inside my own mind , deaf and blind pitted/

Its a sign of the crime committed, armbarred submitted /

Head splitted, i lied when i know i did it/

Their can be no peace, no cure for da desease, /

Nothing stopping this force, homicides dat increase/

No pain or ease, brain frosted wit freeze /

Deadpool rises as the people live on their knees/

Land for lease is killin trees that help us breathe/

Feel dat heat, coming from da beast , white devil's meat/

yeah Deadpool filled like bags of kandy from tricking us treat/

Left silenced wit no beat, i unleash thunder to da streets/

System has me running, Devils stuck to their seats /

i like this, it took a while to get the flow going, but vocab was good......keep it up

yeah nice vocab and i like all the different messages you send.

oooooooo! this is one of those complex ones... what I mean by that is that the messege isn't exactly clear, the rhymes where sort of simple, but like I just said the overall messege is a bit unclear... I started reading it and I just kept going cause it looked interesting... shit was pretty dope, pretty short though, good flow too...

Peace

Yo Alias is true man, still do't really know what yo were talkin bout, yeah, flow wasn't reslly there at the start but you really got into it on this line:

Its a sign of the crime committed, armbarred submitted /

Head splitted, i lied when i know i did it/

Thats nice there dogg, keep it up!

Peace Out!!!!